Honestly! You can't leave us hanging! It is a great story! Please do update it soon! The plot is great! Most people are afraid to use older newsies. Please update soon!

Oh Man, please update soon!

ok this is a grat story, finish it soon i'm dying to know what happens to jonny conlon and frankie kelly!1!

noooooo, you stopped at the worst cliffhanger ever! i know it's been a long time, but this is a fantastic and really creative story. please finish it! you're so close!

is an amazing story and you're an amazing writer. Please tell me you'll update soon? I must know what happens.

-EscapedReality

can you PLEASE update this

You're an amazing writer. That prolouge was amazing. :):)

I love all the different ways of saying money. Great prolouge!

~Jordyn~

Hey, I'm liking the story so far...keep up the good job

Wonderful darling

Ouch. The tension's so thick I can taste it through the screen. Everything's about to go to hell in a handtruck, isn't it?

hhaha this was good! I just cannot wait to see Spots reation to the news!

Oh, shit. This is all going to come crashing down, isn't it? I hope it doesn't, but it looks inevitable. Update soon!

Oh that's right . . . I forgot that Match left her real address. Oops. And Johnny just left the church's address on the door . . . So, is Spot going to find the address too? And then there'll be a big showdown at the chapel? Are Johnny and Frankie going to survive? I mean obviously if you stick to the ending of Romeo and Juliet they won't, but I know that some authors like to change the story so that it has a happy ending. At any rate, thanks for the update. It was amazing. You should have seen me when I saw it - my sister thought that I was going to a heart attack or something. But yeah. That's me - typical overreaction all the way. Anyhoo, please update soon!

wonderful job, darling...just don't wait nearly two months for the next chapter, eh?

omg omg update soon! This story is AMAZING!