Very sweet. Though I wonder what the emergency was that sent Hawke running into a trap without getting any back-up. Like, what did the dog-lords say to trick her?

This was so beautiful! I'm a sucker for angst and romance, and this was perfect!

I love your Fenris! And this is a great story. Much to think about and you could extend it if you wanted to.

Aww, poor guys.

This was nicely written. I like how you've been careful to show Fenris' inexperience and his unsure awkwardness. Good writing.

Wow. My character was also Hawke(F), brown hair, brown eyes, and a Rogue. I couldn't have asked for a more perfect story. It's so sad that this is only a one shot though.

This story made me think of Eponine's song from Les Miserables. Very nicely done.

Lovely and so bittersweet.

Stunningly wonderful read. It might be an idea to make it more than a one-shot as I completely enjoyed that xxx