I was sort of expecting this and still I ended up frowning in shock and contemplation.

Shoot! When I've read the part, "It's okay though, your blood is invisible just like the rest of you", I think my heart just broke.

What does drinking a glass of bleach do? For Jack, at least?

Oh, man. . . That's. . . Dang. Is this what insanity feels like?

Dang. . . ! Jack's life has basically been a living hell, ever since he was rejected by the Guardians.

Alright of all the ways to go that is very painful; after all of that, I don't know why I was expecting a happy ending.

This is soooooo sad. And disturbing. But I love it that you for all your awesome hard work.

Sure he may not die, but that's just make it more of a tragic than it already was. Long life sucks, but a eternal life with pain, betrayal and loneliness is unbearable. I don't think stay alive is the happy ending here. Death should be a blessing to the beyond-repaired lonely immortal boy. I hope death take pity on him and took him to his family... Well but this is Jack we are talking about! Maybe he failed with this attempt and finally be himself again, live his happy life, gaining friendship and love and believers, that would be better!

Tylenol isn't a fast death either,by - you litterally die because waste can't be filtered by the appropriate organs.

If Jack wants to off himself hanging himself would be the best bet- it takes aproximatley four (4) to six (6) minutes to die.

It takes a lot more than a glass of bleach to kill a person immediately.

Sure it fucks up your organs- just like downing a bottle of tylenol would- but your looking at days of a slow painful death if you don't get medical treatment. Weeks to months to years if you do get treated.

Crap ending, really disappointing and stupid. 1) you wrote earlier in the story that guardians couldn’t die 2) he was getting better and 3) what kind is sick demented freak would write something like that?

Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet whyyyyyyy

Please tell me that not how it ends!

Do you want me to burst into tears?
Because it’s working!
~KitoH

This many years later and this Fanfic is still among my favorites and possibly the one I've read the most... Can say nothing but me loving it