Reviews for Albus Potter and the Descent of Dismiusa
Cobalt Tarantula chapter 16 . 6/17
Does Exo ever get cured from his werewolf symptoms?
Cobalt Tarantula chapter 5 . 6/16
I am in Slytherin!
VsWife chapter 18 . 5/4
Don't do this to me... to him... to them. My heart is beating so fast. I'm scared
htarogoehS chapter 13 . 1/21
I thought Albus had successfully made a patronus over summer, why is he acting like he only did it in extremis?
teaotspp chapter 24 . 12/28/2019
Why is Rose suddenly with them?
Emma.Henry.04.20.00 chapter 5 . 11/12/2019
Hufflepuff
ErQMl7AERD chapter 16 . 1/15/2019
Hey! First of all — I really like the series you're writing. Genuinely. It's wonderful to read a story that is composed of such original ideas which are different, not only in semantic detail but in dramatic intent, from the original series. I appreciate that the central conflict has been, well, central for the vast majority of the series (as opposed to the first three books being throw-offs while we stalled for Harry to get old enough as it was in cannon).

Secondly — Something I've noticed is the sheer amount of exposition which is included in this particular edition of the series, especially over the last few chapters. I truly don't think we need as much information as you're giving us in regards to the species of trees, creatures, etc which are coming to the forefront of the story. It stops the momentum of the plot (which is amazing) dead in its tracks, which is a problem because it means the immediate stakes of the moment are lessoned. I wish there could be more situations where Albus faced/came-into-contact-with what HE didn't know about, increasing the tension, and through his learning, we found out more. Getting lectured in class and reading books in the library are great ways of introducing new information, but it introduces them at the expense of both the drama of the moment and the immediate stakes of the story.

Just my two cents!
HallowedExistence chapter 1 . 1/3/2019
I've been binge reading this series nonstop and I don't think I'll regain control of my body until I'm done! I'm so tired, but this is too good!
CyberCat chapter 7 . 12/12/2018
I love this series so much! I even made a deal with my 20 year old sister, that if i read Carry On, then she'd read the first book xD
cribinator chapter 2 . 5/20/2018
Looking at the argument between Chinch and Aubrey here with hindsight, you have to wonder, did he cast the Imperius? It would've helped to push Aubrey away, leaving the Potters less protected. And I also really hope we find out more about Chinchs relationship with his two partners in the Dark Revival
Cody'sFangirl chapter 1 . 3/19/2018
Oh babe, you're the best!You're so perfect for me. By reading your books I can comprehend that you must be really hot(like me).Can you please go out with me?Please? Answer as soon as you can babe.
Om verma chapter 5 . 12/1/2017
Griffindor
JSLF930CJX chapter 16 . 10/25/2017
Why didn't they all escape to Hogsmeade through the Room of Requirement, or other passageways that were not physically blocked off?
CorruptedLily chapter 5 . 10/10/2017
I started reading your series in the middle of last week and it's fantastic. I love it.
I love that Albus is Gryffindor, I feel he very much belongs in it while other members of the family might not.
I can't stop reading.

I just wanted to say I'm in Slytherin, though I always thought I was a Ravenclaw, when Pottermore came out I was sorted in Slytherin with only answering as honestly as possible without preference to any House. I have much Slytherin pride and I love that my best friend is a Hufflepuff..now I'm rambling.
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed.
I usually do when I'm finished reading.

This series is amazing. I can't wait to find out about this creature.
Om verma chapter 16 . 10/8/2017
BIG BACK DROP IN YOUR STORY BROTHER!...HOGWARTS IS CONNECTED TO FLOO NETWORK AND HENCE THEY COULD ALL HAVE FLED HOGWARTS AND GET BACK TO THERE HOME SWEET HOMES!
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