Laughed my arse off all the way through.

Wonderful job! Great stories

So I was re-reading through of these Outtakes while bored out of my mind while stuck in what I shall refer to as "waiting room hell", and let me just say this chapter caused me to have a really funny mental image that was too stupid not to share. So here I go...

Given Sumia and Lissa's reactions, I couldn't help imagining the scene cutting to another parrellel timeline identical to this one right as that universes Nyk is about to fight Grima. Then suddenly Nyk, Chrom, Sumia, and Lissa from the story's universe suddenly appear out of a portal, tackle Grima to the ground, and then start kicking the crap out of him. A minute later Grima is left lying on the ground groaning in pain, with Nyk turning to his parrellel self "alright, sorry about that, you can take it from here" before he and the others go back through the portal, leaving that world's very confused Shepherds going "... what the fu-"

Yeah, it's very stilly and dumb, but I thought I would share.

Anyhow, now that I'm here, I should probably leave an actual review. I honestly am torn emotionally reading this chapter, part of me feels really really really bad for Lucina, while the other part of me just wants to go "aaawwwww" at all the sweetness of Nyk comforting here. I guess this is a good thing, since it means I got hit emotionally in two different ways. I hope she does heal over time, having to go through all that...

First off, IM SO GLAD THIS WAS MADE! Second (More seriously) I will read the next story. THANKS FOR THIS!

I am sad to see an end to a story it really hurts, but knowing you're continuing makes me wait in anticipation for the next story. thank you for continuing writing you have a talent for writing.

Aww
Its over...
It was a wonderful story, I like it.
I can't wait for the next story!
*smiles*

It's been a really Nice run. Glad I was able to attend through 87% of this with you. I wish you the best and Congradulations on finishing this. "Best of Luck in your Future Endeavors" - I don't think I have to say who I am quoting.

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Very well done.

I don't think I could do this many one shots all together. Each of your Avatar's was a unique and interesting character, though my personal favorite was Silver.

And I'm happy about Smash Bros. too, though I want to see Morgan in it as well.

Haha oh Morgan!
I simply love him! So cute and adorable!
Has to have the last word! XD
Mmm for Tharja I felt like she would be slightly happy that its Morgan courting Noire since that way she would be closer to the avatar. Just my thoughts is all

Hahaha funny funny
I thought her voice was too girlish

That song!
Just after Emmeryns death.. And then the fact that the army doesn't actually want to fight you either... Needless to say I couldn't stop my tears when that song played..
And the the wyverns stared attacking me and I had to get over it -.-' darn them

Yeah I finally put a name
Why not? Haha

Thanks so much! That scene with Lucina facing Grima always bothered me. It looks like she's either going to try and fight alone or get eaten. Regardless she'd end up dead. So thanks again. Apparently my imagination is very limited with cutscenes

One question: was it Cynthia's that you said had dark hair? If so that would make Frederick her father no? The only other guys that have a support with Sumia are Gaius Henry and Chrom and none of them have dark hair. Simply asking so I don't get the couples messed up in my head

It was a great run, and while I am sad to see the story end, I am thrilled you were able to finish it. Congrats on your goal!

Haha, and yes, I am also waiting in anticipation for the 3DS release (and eventually I am getting both versions). But I still can't believe the announcement actually brought both characters into the game. Looks like selling a million copies of Awakening was worth two character spots :)

Awwww how cute!
Seriously you're making me wish even more that Chrom was real! They're just so cute together!
I've paired him up with all his other supports and they aren't as great (although I'm pretty sure I'm biased haha )

I was always wondering when she told him that dream. Seriously thanks to your interpretation of that moment it makes a bit more sense. I could never logically fit that scene in my head
And the avatar reacting that way fit the scene beautifully
I realize I can't just call her Silver
An awkwardness of saying your own name... Sort of.. I'm just being weird i guess sorry XD

Haha some brother and sister or something like that
Just what you would expect from that dolt
The charm bracelet was a great idea and the book is perfect for the avatar

I'll probably be up late reading all the awakening ones you have since I've never played path of radiance
I wonder if I should leave a name for this review? Mmmmm maybe it'll be weird since I'll probably leave it under the name Silver lol