I can't practically don't understand what's happening any-more

very good

I do hope you show how vampire society functions.

And here I though I would read a ME fic that Humanity is made of two Race Werewolf and Vampires

Interesting story, please continue it!

this is a good chapter but try not to stick real close the the cannons of theses universes, please update.

maybe you should just use Underworld elements? that would be complicated enough to write.
but it is an Interesting Idea either way.

I think the story would have been much more exciting if you'd get into the story right away, or post the first real chapter togetherwith the 'history' one. The 'history' could also have become unneccessary just by spending a few paragraph giving synapse of what had happened rather than listing all that already happened in the movies.

Interesting idea please continue.

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James Heller is infected with the virus, becoming the new PrototypeSelene arrive at New York ZeroThrough Anton Koenig, it is revealed that Mercer has created a race of Evolved, and has spread them throughout NYZ, especially among Blackwatch and and Gentek reveal a cure for the Blacklight virus; the "Whitelight" compoundHeller disrupts Mercer's plan to taint and release the Whitelight, which would have spread the virus rather than cure enters the Red ZoneHeller discovers his daughter has survived the outbreakHeller confronts and nearly consume Alex Mercer, before being beheaded by Selene.
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This made absolutely no sense. Clean it up a little so it doesn't resemble a jumbled mass of words and names.

Also, since Heller and Mercer are made of biomass, beheading wouldn't quite work I think. They'd have to be beheaded and torn to pieces multiple times to lose enough biomass and die. I mean, we've seen Mercer regenerate from a pile of goo that could fit in a bowl.

Apart from that, it's a promising start and I can't wait to see how you incorporate all these universes in your story.

You know I normally avoid multi fandom crossovers since it always feels like there's something missing and I can count on one hand the number of stories that I've liked. To be honest I think you made a mistake with your characterization of Michael and Selene ( what little of it there was). Regarding James Heller well if you go by cannon decapitation is at best a setback.

I understand this is your story and you may or may not have a road map on how you want things to play out but I suggest that you don't alter the characters so much that the only things they share with the original is their names since from what little there was it looks like you want to make Selene and Michael enemies.

By the way the space is your friend since there are a few times you missed separating a few words "PrototypeSelene"

Sheesh. Lots of setup, but no story. Also you would do well to not use the events of P2. Radical Entertainment utterly screwed to plot of prototype so they could make Mercer into what he once fought agnist, and make Heller into a walking cliche.

Besides, you think Heller or Mercer can be killed with a beheading? Your not really researching these things, are you?