Like I said in chat, your skill in poetry is greatly improving, in leaps and bounds. I really like the new style you've adopted-it's more rhythmic in a way, and it's just... well, beautiful. Your vocabulary is excellent, and you've really used it to create the image you intended to form and present to us. You really grasped the emotion of Tsubasa here-the feeling of being the 'second' lover, and as the one who /isn't/ the lover in the eyes of society. Deep, Athie, DEEP.

agh and I just love this okay MY HEART ACTUALLY WISHED FOR A NATSUBASA HAPPY ENDING EVEN WHEN I DON'T SHIP NATSUBASA AND OHHH MY GOD YOU ARE AMAZING I LOVE THIS

OHMYGOD THIS IS SO PERFECT I CAN'T BREATHE I CAN'T

You wrote a NaTsubasa poem. AN ETHEREAL NATSUBASA POEM. I adore the fact that you used the seasons in here and I love the title so much that I'm rushing off to research about the band Maybe Next Summer. You say that you 'tried'? I say you EXCELLED. I'm very certain that a lot of readers will enjoy this so much because every sliver of your poem is so quotable and so heart-wrenching. I love (gosh I'm crying with a downpour of all of my feelings now) the way you wrote about their secret affair - the portion about spring was absolutely impeccable and gosh, you are A poet, with your understates but nevertheless brilliant talent.

You know, I kind of contradict the title if I were to be asked 'When will you love this poem?'

No, not 'maybe next summer'.

I love it forever and always 3

Thank you so much for dedicating such a captivating poem to me, and for imparting your talent to the FFn community. Trust me, you're perfect. I love you so much 3 8))))