| Reviews for She dreams of Golden Hope |
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   DawnScarlet19610 chapter 2 . 1/2 You really need to work on your format. Your paragraphs are way too long and your dialogue is not correctly formatted. It's actually quite awful even just looking at the page. |
| DawnScarlet19610 chapter 1 . 1/2 Prologue is pretty bad. You literally just stole the opening scene of the movie, which made reading this chapter a complete waste of my time. |
| Captainfredrickwentworth chapter 30 . 1/8/2019 I don’t know if it was intended, but I also caught a little North and South in this chapter. Which would be fitting since Thorin is Thornton. Loving this story! |
| x NikiSt x chapter 1 . 1/11/2018 You literally broke my heart. |
| xTwistedChaosx chapter 17 . 2/25/2017 I'm only on chapter 16 but so far this is a really well thought out and written story. I do really enjoy the amount of detail you go into with each chapter and am perfectly fine with the pace of the story thus far. One critc I have is there not being a seperation between what is spoken and it is being descried. It makes it a little difficult to read. Otherwise this is definitely one of my favorite stories. ~Twisted |
| Guest chapter 30 . 8/23/2015 Did you just quote north and south? I adore that movie and Richard armitage in it! |
| Erudessa-gabrielle chapter 45 . 5/31/2015 WHOA I DID NOT EXPECT THIS STORY TO END LIKE THAT WHOA |
| molly.harbridge chapter 45 . 5/26/2015 Loved this story although I must tell you that you have a singular distinction... I absolutely DO NOT EVER read fanfic where Thorin dies. Until yours. I wish you well with future writings... |
| mellisa chapter 44 . 1/7/2015 such a beautiful story, kindly please finish it |
| anon chapter 44 . 1/7/2015 wonderful chapter, please update |
| WriterGirl1198 chapter 44 . 7/15/2014 ... I'm dead. I'm gonna go crawl into a hole and die now... You write too much like Tolkien... Most of the time that's good. Here, that's terrible. That's my Thorin! You just killed him! Oh Illuvatar... I'm dying... Dying... Dying... I'm bawling out my eyes... But you did update, just like you said. *smiles through my tears* You did so beautifully... Even if you did just kill my heart, life, and soul... |
| WriterGirl1198 chapter 43 . 7/15/2014 I love this story, you know that. I don't know anything in this that you need to change or re-write. I just love this story, Miss Tolkien *wink* and I cannot wait for the next chapter! |
| reika88 chapter 42 . 5/14/2014 ori isn't the youngest, kili is |
| Just4Me chapter 42 . 5/10/2014 I hate seeing Thorin like this - cold, heartless, spiteful and sinking into insanity. She's right to run away. But I do wish he could be saved, and they could have a happy ending. |
| WriterGirl1198 chapter 42 . 5/6/2014 Oh no. It's starting... You're going to kill me with this story, aren't you? Maybe even worse than the movie will. |
