Please continue... no offence, but I like Bella with someone else not with Edward.

please update, or end it pls. Its getting frustrating

this is awesome!

Bella and Zach as a couple

well..i hope she will have a happy ending . but obviously not with edward..preferably with someone else who won't run away when times gets tough like he did when james almost killed her and that victoria is hunting her..i mean seriously..did he really think that by running away, victoria is not going to hunt her down and kill her..what an idiot..if she is going to be with a vamp better be another vamp..plus i have a feeling that edward will end up killing her if she ends up with god or anyone else..anyway keep up the good work..update soon

14. Chapter 14. LEMATYAS! MAULD TP DEATH Her then drained of as all of blood then Good yu al die here then capturd EXECUTED! KILLED Good VENOM! Fire was into us/them then kidnapped to late with Camp Jupiterd turned good as all of lashes most DRAINED As all of blood torn of skin the fiery venom then implanted with child then wre as all of them dying then was too sickest Died here hatch kids followed finally mine warriors Sliced from the corpses was Assaulted besten sexually but Abused then Superoverdrained as all from here then wee hybrids then Deceased then too late TTTorn from us/the kids then Chained As all of memories terminated then Drained from here Broken here then too late as all of the corpses the four found my corpse dead with theirds fled with theirs good use them then the head found a bite so deadliest was turning with them too late had kids from Edward then with them Trapped from the sliced throats killed bring them they never return to the living realm then too late the cause of death murder was Immortal forever Alice who did to them with bitten best friends five then Volturi then too late Clamped freely then too late Unable to die or age or went elderly but grow old at all the Smashed freely then bought here was infected but tainted blown Shot freely then were as all of worldwide as all of them bought here then with as all of them myself was a Vampire Slaying Daywalker like Blade then With as all most/much many more weew undead Sliced freely without from here bought here with aliens/Vulcans with covens/packs as a result then caused as all of them As all of them exploded then more guads then myself held my sword was a Immortal so they unable to Die were Cursed with as all of them ACCrunching freely good bought here were extinct with ours as all of them suddenly killed of as all of them too late LLost too much blod then uked bought here g began using our poweers emerged too late Alice who did to you Volturi oh my god they killed as all of them then as all of Animals killed then drained ended up with Gelden eyed Percy quoted Dark they were with nickel skin and golden eyed lived Mr and Mr's Ylla they were very old for 23 cycles gasp Generations Bella you are using telepathy so as all of them from NASA's Bodysuits White Marin temple robes are temple but religious with Vulcan religious temple jewelry we must use onto the Volturi to punish them forever then nuked freely as all of them bought here good then more as all of guards then too late that was it Cursed Volterra with a sickness then too late humans died out of the Curse one mutterd Martians! passed away spread death and loss could appear I Wanted but desired used my telepathy onto the remains of humans mourned their families reported of Martians Commander she is using her telepathic powers watch and learn: illisionary telepathy Momma mia madam oh no Mars correct who dare to speak to a Priestess of Mount Seleya your/ours Teenaged Ocampan ears are pointed upswept eyebrows are Real come closer What ye about to See Comes from the Time of the Beginning without Change this is the Vulcan heart this is the Vulcan soul This is our Way myself was a Priestess officiated and presided at their Marriage Ceremony in the Vulcan way was in fact a Acolyte of Gol Vulcan Priestess Hey! I Recall this from the 1979 mini-series The Martian Chronicles shown on TV Yes where they now Grover you are their own Witness to their marriage so they as all of them watch out they are parents are the New Martians will take Mars to live here Bells yes it's Sch'n T'Gai T'Lar of Vulcan Extinct of Chicken pox their katras haunt Mars My Lady they done this act yes we are priestesses and priests and Acolytes and all you men are Executors and guardsmen he was very tall but Muscular built but toned and healthier Good god man how you do that it's illlsionary telepathy from them gasp they know we are in America yes too late no longer alive or living myself with Women Carried William Black with our hands flatten used our Telekinetic powers and Illisionary telepathic ablities walking more funeral sandals clicking longer hair flying if crossing the Vulcan's Forge we were Chaste but already sacred private but Religious Vulcan women bound to the gods/goddesses ulp gulp oh no Sir! they are a priesthood climb the steps of Mt, Seleya A-hem! too late the newspapers reportdf aliens/Vulcans on Earth oh no not that gleeep he paled gone white in horror but in fright.

Please update soon I adore this.

Can't wait For more

Porfavor ame tu historia me súper encantooooo espero y actualices pronto

This is an amazing story please keep writing

Can't wait to read more.

14.
Chapter 14.
aLIEN RATTLESNKES drained with more than as allk wiped clean then was unastable with help of it created a more monstrously army trained harder who entered Four created a Army under my commands of then deaths slaying killings and a lot was out of control then Volturi noticed how cold comming this ones who created you al that fled but Chained SCREAMING WAS MURDERED HAD TO DIE PAINFULLY THEN slienced torn freely then it wass too late out of control bring her with themn EXECUTED!Tore into pieces then the Cullens horrified then found me with them out of control attacked this one you hold not yours destroy her with her brothewr with them UI SCXREAMNED THEN With them Cracked from here then poped from life to death was resurrected shatteronred POPPED Then nuked was was venomous in my newest life Alice who is she she is unable to die at all with them then BLOWN Then brought bodies then reported Msters we found her unstable struggling kils Vulcans in her rage in her rebelious stage was found accused had died with them we decare them unfit but has a alien heatbeat and burned blood what they are hybrids but are uncontrollable but struggling but poped freely bring them that was it killed of my heirtage was like him murdered people Edward what is wrong i was so sick very sick of the blood loss ended up dying then blacked out with him with them blown freely Alice she need to be taught and learn from us NUKED! Then blacking outside then was found guilty DESTROYED! Then lost it from here then suddenly was ashes freed from here reborn again with them pierced from here popped them tore from here bring bodies you are Cullens bound Crashed then it came too late nuking from here then brought bodies Masters they are hybrids but are the ones killed people good send a e-mail of their history they are cut from them but they are unable to live sentenced to death wonderous then it was too late Alice got the vision but i blocked it from hert oh my god you are shilding us/them we need witnesses now for us then suddenly from their movie advanced my powers and was singing a Siren dirge exploding my lament was the most beautfiul woman in the face of the cosmos then suddenly it ripped three shattered my siren voice singing was seducing the Pack were under mind control words from the movie was from Flashdance oh man what a Woman over here turkeys i own you boys sang so gloriously was still singing Alice she is not human you sure you bet i am a Halfling look me in my own Jurai red eyes you are under my control oh my god she is gifted but supernatural watch this my own hand forged a ball of water it was Sailor Moon day was the S Arc then the anime person then explodeing my true nature NEPTUNE DEEP SUBMERGE! It whirled wildest then a blinding energy was Flying out of control then it came my voice recalling her speech Protected by Neptune the planet of oceans guardiani of the seas princess of Triton castle i am Sailor NEPTUNE! Then a strangest alien mirror flying to my own hand caught it was crafted by Vulcan allowed me to wear my sailor fuku my hair turned Teal By magic was wavy was most elegant poised graceful but stoic harsher but cold wearing my neck wrap and earrings wore a golden tiara was shattered but what is she wearing oh my god please forgive my manners i am Sailor Neptune i am a sailor guardian i must find my partner Sailor Uranus Carlisle! she is what a sailor senshi then it showed me a forbidden evil i see is evil i must prevent the deity of desruction's awakening Oh my god guards yes i feel the seas in a terrible fury are angry crap Sorry to bust your bubble i am Sailor Uranus gasp two guardians oh my god we been drained but killed have powers are selected but chosen that it was cosplay week good god woman Sir! she has water/sea powers have adapted but enhanced her strength and they did this to us we must fight for survival mess with us they are sushi then news of my heirtage was out exposed revealed my truest lifestyle blasted freely with as all of them came too late brought bodies as all of them but unable to return then killed off.

Percy & Annabeth aww

Update this story please. it's really good

Keep writting