your use of minor characters and world building is amazing! I'm seriously loving this, you've done an amazing job!

Hey, do you still plan on finishing this story? It's really good. I was really getting into it until the last Chapter. Don't leave us hanging man

Just found this story and finished all the chapters in about a week couldn't stop reading change very little mainly dialog from Shepard says bloody in the story which throws you off lol add a little bit of his renegade persona when hen the situcalls for it. But love the story I'm hooked and need more at this point really hope you continue this story it's one of if not the best story post me3 Miri shep romance stories that auctaly follow the lore. Suggestion if your looking to bring a bit of drama in might wanna think about something happening to Shepards mom that involves Hackett maybe a date gone wrong etc and you still need to give everybody the wedding,a crazy nite out for both Miri and john but something happens that could test their relationship. Feel free to message me don't want to see this end

I have really enjoyed this story and I sincerely hope that you intended to add more to it even though you haven't in a while. Anyway this is my favorite frantic and I hope out hope for more.

Just finished reading all the chapters, honestly I was hooked after the first. Really good stories, could have done with a bit more action and xxx but all in all a really enjoyable read as a continuation from after ME3. Top Job mate

Fantastique ! c'était super à lire, à la fois drôle, émouvant, tout un tas de sentiments en lisant l'histoire. J'aimerais en trouver plus comme celle-ci ! mais ce n'est pas chose facile, en tout cas bravo j'ai adoré ! Miri est mon personnage favori dans Mass Effect avec quelques autres mais elle est ma chouchoute

Why wasn't this story continued? It's bloody brilliant

are there any lemons in this story?

Fantastic story hope you choose to continue it sometime

Not bad good story, only one thing. I wouldn't use erm, maybe hmm, but i understand it's hard to write people thinking. Other wise, good fan fiction my friend.

Pleeeease write another chapter sooooon

Miranda/Shepard is always nice

I don't want to leave a review on every chapter since I am playing catch up. Any way you are doing a great job with this story and I like the plot lines. I really do enjoy this story.

One idea I had for a future story line is since Shepard and Miranda's kids are botics why not use them to explore what biotics are and how they are treated by the government and the world at large. In the first Mass Effect game there were hints in some of the dialog,missions,and codex entries that biotics are not treated in the best way by the government. That they are reguarded with fear and not completely trusted by normal people and in some cases exploited. this was not brought up in the other two games but it was there in the first one and I think you have the perfect set up to explore this issue from the POV of children and their parents.

Any way it was just an idea.

Please keep up the good work.

I am finally getting a chance to catch up with this story,and you are doing a good job with it.

One thing I don't want to live in a world that doesn't know what a western is. It's depressing like no one knowing what Baseball is in Star trek. John Wayne is the best movie hero of all time and if people forget that I am building a time machine and going off to live in another time.

Great job,keep up the good work.

I love your story and I know it's been a while since you last updated but please finish the story I have to know how it ends