Amazing

Why the heck did Astrid just ditch Liz while she is crippled LOL and why the heck did Lucy not use her teleportation and/or summon one of her Spirits when jumping from a THREE STORIES HIGH?!

Smh but keep it up!

Normally I don't like the cliché Lucy gets more OP than anyone else fan fiction nor do I like fics with OC's. This fanfiction is PERFECT because Lucy gets stronger without becoming the strongest person by miles (she just learns teleportation magic and increases her physical abilities) btw, I feel like they stopped teleporting in recent chapters.

I know this fic is complete and was written a long time ago, before Lucy had her Star Dress powers, otherwise she would already be a lot stronger

Sorry about this but I think imma stop reading your story, I came for the Nalu but it al seems to be about Astrid. It IS a good story, just I don’t have the patience

I love when this happens

nalu.

im sad this ended because this whole thing was AWESOME!

Can you make lucy Atstrid and Damon dragon slayers? Welp I am super late so this is just a wish and a hope i quess...

I love it I love it I love it

By the way, Google Translate sucks when it comes to Latin. Try William Whititakers Words. It's what my Latin teacher tells us to do if we don't know the meaning of something.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! What did you do to him?!

Astrid cares about Liz? What alternate world am I living in?

No, I wanted Liz and Ryan to end up. You monster. Sorry, I'm just emotional right now.

smklsd bjhzxnkl

This is possibly one of the best fanfiction I've read. Seriously. And Astrid, Liz and Damon are possibly my most liked OC's ever. Kudos to you!