Great!

This was a really great short. I loved everything about it!

I thought your docket was incredibly believable. Thank you

First of all, I liked the story. I'm a huge Jess fan and I rewrite this ending every time I see this episode.
But mostly I wanted to compliment your writing. It's really, really well done. Your word choice is fantastic; you do an amazing job of capturing the emotions and the tone without adding unnecessary details. I found myself re-reading lines because the imagery was so pretty. Thanks for the awesome story!

Fantastic! Please write more like this!

Loved it! Loads of lovely imagery and it was so perfectly Jess and Rory :) I think this sits alone nicely as a one-shot but I'm definitely not going to grumble if you add more!

I like this! Nice writing style. Please continue. I can never get enough Literati.

I really like your version. I think part of the appeal to Rory and Jess are the possibilities, and how they can still accomplish everything together. Write more Gilmore Girl fics? Please! :)