I remember reading this a few years ago and I have been trying to find it for ages and it is still as amazing as I remember! I'm so glad I managed to find it again and I just wanted to say how much I loved it back when it was originally published and how much I love it now, which is a lot! Definitely my favourite out of all the Micah fanfics I have read!

That was so cute! Scythia's a great character!

amazing you are the best righter of all time! ;)

i thought it was reallly great

Really good! I think if you cut out some of the more modern words such as 'guy'
It would allow the story to flow a bit more. Please don't change it if you disagree
But I think that Micah should be a little more hungry? Still great.

You might have your own reasons, but I think that Micah and Mellony were supposed to end up together. Just a tip.

I really enjoyed reading this! The only thing I would recommend would be to expand a little on Scythia's character. I couldn't really figure out her personality and it didn't seem very... convincing? Or things like where did she learn to control her magic or wield a sword? I did like how you added details like holding her cup a certain way though.
Overall though, I liked this! There aren't enough good Seven Realms fics out there :)

I enjoyed reading your story. It was nice and I think Scythia is like the most badass wizard ever. I wish there were more wizards who knew hand-to-hand combat than just those that rely on their flash. if they knew hand-to-hand, they wouldn't have been captured by Montaigne so easily and burned alive. / Anyway, i really enjoyed it.

Somewhat clique, (sorry I don't have the accent thingy, on my phone lol) POV seems random at times, perhaps rewrite the way the OC is brought in? I would like a 1st person POV on a main character to see what they think of her.

It was ok

How come it changes point of view after a while?