Lol bahahaha poor James!

Haha, excellent story! D

Hi um, I thought I'd offer some helpful critiques if you're interested? The storyline seems fine, but try to watch your tenses. Keep everything past or present tense, and watch out for word variation and redundancy. It will improve your writing, which is honestly better than a lot of the university papers I've seen, so I do mean this as a compliment.

Hahaha that was great ! :) and really funny at the end!

Thanks:') aha, I didn't think it was one of my bests when writing, but reading it over now.. It's actually not as bad as I thought! Thanks for your review, I'm glad my story killed you in a good way, but please.. Don't actually die now 0.o hehe.

Ehhhehee!lol!That last bit was just too funny!And I do like how Sirius thinks of sex as a stress reliever!Awesome fic!I think the hotness killed me in a good way!