Well done that right there was epic.

Oh boy oh boy. At least Merope is free.

I had to re read this whole story! It's so good! Please continue! I would love for Merope to give birth to Tom Marvolo Riddle but raising him with Kevin haha

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I love it

I don’t like your prejudice, which is justified and probably not a prejudice, against the Blacks, who are a snobby pureblood family, and Slytherins. Just because I like Phineas Nigellus Black, and you had to make him bad! It’s not even relevant, so whatever. The only good criticism is that none of that was relevant and this is a pretty stupid review, but you didn’t have to make him a bad person... other than that I am loving the story.

I really liked the story and hope you continue it. The only thing I didn’t like was the unnecessary and irrelevant prejudice against slytherins - mainly in this chapter - and you making phineas nigellas black a bad person. You know, I like him. But you can do whatever you like with your characters, I guess.

I hope Merope marries the Hale’s son - sorry I can’t remember his name. I know, he’s a main character, and I just read through the entire story! Either him, or Regulus Black, but it would be a waste of a lot of character development, wouldn’t it. I only say him, because it would be an interesting dynamic: Merope’s desire to get away from her Father and Brother’s principles, and Regulus’ Supremacist ideology. I mean, it may be because I like Regulus from the books, but still... In the end it’s your choice though. I’m just here to give you critique and ideas.

The main criticism I would give would be a few grammatical mistakes, but it’s not a consistent thing, so it’s normal, and, anyway, what can I say, considering the numerous grammatical mistakes that are probably in this very review!

All in all a great story. Good luck, and bye!

Oh obviously a good story.

You are one the few writers still around from the old days (2000's)
that makes me happy.

Please update soon I really love your story

Love it!

Please update as soon as you can. :)

Awww. Merope is surrounded by awesome men and she's just opening her eyes.

Professor Voldemort!

Wolfsbane, aka monkshood, although it was being phased out, was still used medicinally, at this time.