This is so great! I really liked how you kept Loki's 'bad side' and that you didn't just change him entirely. Because I think that if he did fall in love and get accepted once again that, he would retain that which made him fall in the first place because it's a part of him. It's such a good story, I didn't fully understand the change in Jane's eyes though, what was the purpose of that? To show physically how she has changed? Thanks for a great read!

I love how sassy Jane is; I'm having a great time reading your version of her

I liked the first part "Lost before the dawn" but this sequel is just too much. Jane is an elf? lol

Awwe. I love this.
Im going to pretend Aoife is the new queen
Erik stays for the rest of his days by Janes side.

This is such a sweet ending! Very appropriate! I like how Tony looks after her in both stories.
This is such creativity. I love how Jane can kick butt, and she gets to be Queen Mother of Alfheim! Their little kids are to cute!
The Jane/Loki was great too. Just enough smut, drama, angst and happy times to keep everyone interested.
Thank you for writing!

Your Lokane stories are epic! You should definitely write a new multi-chapter story.

Nice Ending.

Sigh...thank the gods. )

SERIOUSLY!? WTH? Well that's disappointing. .../

I wanna slap her...hard. Sif spoke true words when speaking of their child. She takes the risk of orphaning her little girl. I understand that she's worried for him, I would be too in her situation, but there's no way I would be selfish enough to put myself in danger if I had a child to think about. Now if there wasn't a child, that would be a different story.

As a mom, I'm kinda pissed with her right now. I'm proud that she became a Queen and such, but not so much in the fact that she took her CHILD to a realm where there is a war going on. What the heck was she thinking? Sure, let's place my kid smack dab in the middle of killing...sure, that sounds like a good idea. ( Loki should be the one pissed here.

It's cool and all, but I kinda wanna slap her stubborn ass. So now she's gonna risk her little girl losing BOTH her parents. Who's going to take care of Aoife if both her & Loki fall? She possibly dooming her daughter to be a freakin' orphan because she couldn't listen to her other half for ONCE. It wouldn't have killed her to send her army as assistance and name someone general to lead in her place. I'm kinda disappointed in her at the moment. ( There's no way I'd leave my child like that if I didn't have to.

I'm gonna concede the fact that an 18 month old is speaking in complete sentences because she's part alien. Still a little bit of a stretch though. And do I need to go back and find where they went to Thor's coronation or did they just not go?

Please write more stories like this I love them. Pleaseeeeee

There are some great life lessons in this chapter. It brings so much life to the already living world you've created with this story.