Sometimes short is best! Good!

The way you dissect their psyches is most impressive. You have these characters more depth and it is a lot of fun to read.

I like the few lines that you have here, but am confused as to why you didn't create an actual story.

It was suicide by cop, Kate. Get over it.

Get over it. Get over it.

The words echo in her head as if they've been recorded onto a repeating loop she can't turn off.

Get over it. Get over it.

Sometimes she hates her job, and today is one of those days.

Get over it.

He's not the first man she's shot at. He's not even the first man she's killed.

Get over it.

But he is the first innocent she's killed. The first person who she couldn't tell herself deserved it.

Get over it.

She's not sure she can

Wow well written and sad , Kate needed a beer and a hug or both after that one as I recall.