Love it so much. Keep writing your great

Hahah loved it! Especially the small twist at the end XD Smooth moves, Soul.

if it's a guy you are supposed to use "HE" as a pronoun

I said it before and I'll say it again: Soul plus babies is the most precious mathematics I can think of.

Really enjoying it so far. Especially the second one. :) Very cute and I especially thought you summed up their characters accurately yet in a short, elegant way. Can't wait for more.

-Bright

Adorable. I liked it. :)

Oh, I like the super snarky bartender Soul!

Awww, these are awesome so far! Keep writing; it's hard to find a good fic, and here seems to be one! 3

there are a very few people who after being brained by a blond at a bar would conclude this is going to be fun
soul is certainly one of those people though especially if the blonde wears pigtails has green eyes and her name is maka

awww that is cute well done love souls side note criticizing the pianist
silly soul she likes you too why else do you think the woman who self proclaims to be a horrid dancer wants you to take a dancing class that puts you in extremely tight fitting clothing ?

This is all kinds of magnificent, frankly. A nice little slice of life bit of wonderful Meet Cute.

This is fabulous. Loved it.

This was excellent! You've captured very subtle emotions and you did a great job showing and not telling. Loved it!

*rolls around in the sweet downy of this fic's fluff* eue Thank you for this, it's really well written. Simple and captivating style

Wow, this is really beautifully done, excellent imagery, like it was a scene that I was witnessing firsthand. Their chemistry is so tangible, but their communications wonderfully subtle, the way they communicate through brief touched and the looks in their eyes. I really love it Awesome.:)