Reviews for Twisted
Romina963 chapter 1 . 7/19/2016
Your writing made my day 3 It was so good and sexy just when I needed to read some DoflaCroc I found this and loved it amazing job I could imagine them saying all those things to each other, thanks for this.
Yuki Artsa chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
I fracktail love this, brah 0/0
I'm a big DoflaCroc shipper, and this is just...AGH IT'S PERFECT ‹33333333
Stirling Phoenix chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
For some strange reason I had a craving to read Doflamingo/Crocodile fanfiction for the very first time, and I must say that I picked a fantastic story to be my first. I truly enjoyed reading your perspective on their relationship, it seems so realistic (if Doflamingo and Crocodile really did have a sexual relationship with each other, of course). I really liked the dialogue as well. The way they talked to each other, especially during the sex, was incredibly interesting and it felt so right. You've done a fantastic job, I loved it!
Synkronize chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Very great story O_O
Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
OMG
How didn't i i find this before.
I'm so shocked there are so little reviews, this story is ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!
As dark and sexy as the characters on it.
How it has been said, you portrayed them really well. And their conversations are just HILARIOUS. Specially the one at the end.
If you keep writing Like that, i'll be driven to insanity in no time!
Keep up the good work! (_)/
A cat called whisper chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
oh creepy and strange, i like it
black-misty-sky chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
This is great! It's dark but really well written. Great job!

BMS
The Red Harlequin On The Luna chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
-feels like a horrible fan- I'm so sorry for the late review. T-T I've had a bit of a sinus infection and have felt like crap. But I have finally gotten around to finish reading this awesome story! :D I LOVE DOFLADILE! We need more of them. D: Specially great ones like yours!

I'm kinda shocked no one else has reviewed yet. :( This is well written and an epic pairing. There are very few typos (if you like I can point them out later), grammar is well done and all of it flows wonderfully. All are huge points for any story in my book.

I like the way they're portrayed in this storyline. Its a fresh idea as well. Their conversation beforehand was interesting. They danced well around each other before giving in. It feels to me like they were trying to show that they didn't need each other but were there all the same.

Crocodile, even when bottoming he's still topping. XD The only man who can belittle Doflamingo and not only get away with it but make him like it.

Doflamingo I think is entranced with Crocodile due to him not immediately either throwing himself at him, showed no respect nor wariness if not outright fear, and can't and won't be manipulated. He presents a challenge and a puzzle that he will probably spends years trying to figure out, getting more lost in it as he goes.

For Crocodile, I think he both tolerates and indulges Doflamingo simply because he's bored and while annoying most times Doflamingo is entertaining. He's not pitiful like most of his conquests would tend to be and wants nothing more from him than his time and body. For a man with a mind like Crocodile's nothing is worse than boredom. Doflamingo is many things, boring is certainly not one.

This was a wonderful and interesting representation of their potential dynamic. :) Hope to see more in the future.

May your Muse be inspirational and your Plot Bunnies carnivorous