Reviews for Operation Flying Starfish
DistrictThirteenTribute chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
I have so much to say about this story (but don't worry, it's all good).
-If there's an episode when Henry goes his first date, I swear to God I'm going to cry. Jared Gilmore is growing up so quickly and it's really difficult for me to adjust to it in this season.
-There's NEEDS to be more fanfiction out there for Neal/Henry father/son bonding. Loved seeing it here!
-Based on this story, I would be as wary as Emma about Neal giving Henry dating advice. But it made for a great story, so it works!
-As gross as I thought Neal cleaning the ring with his teeth was and wanting Emma to kiss him to take it, i thought it was so cute! Neal is amazing. I will never get over the fact that he's gone.
-"Aw hell no..." that would ABSOLUTELY be Emma's reaction if he proposed to her like that.
-Is that ice cream shop real? Because it sounds awesome! Eugene, Oregon?

I am totally adding this to my favorites. And not to sound pretentious or anything, but it's a hard list to get on. I loved this so much. The dialogue and characters were spot on! Great, GREAT JOB!
silveryuki061 chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
That was so horrendously adorable and now my cheeks hurt from grinning so much! Aaah what to do... Sigh like I said - totally cute and thoroughly enjoyed it. :)
titania eli chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
this is so fuçking cute i could puke out confetti and marshmallow. this must be the third time i'm reading this story.
celino chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
This was sooooo sweet! And adorable! And cute! A lovely little fic! I can't stop smiling :) Great job.
Grace chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
OH MY GOD that was f***ing amazing
maressaonce chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
OMG this story was beyond cute! I just love your writing style and your storytelling. Can't get enough of your Swanfire stories. I'll read every single one of them. And I really hope you'll be able to update 'Maid to love you' soon- love that story. 3
JChase chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
So cute! Really well written :)
mamaXunicorn chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
That was the cutest thing ever omg I love it! Amazing job asdfgdshbsh
sudoku chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Oh my goodness, it's so cute. Neal's dating history is not that bad if he sticks to blondes (Morrained, Wendy). I'm sure there are more things to like out of Neal :D
rainingonsunday chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Seriously. Words cannot describe what I am feeling right now. This is so perfect, Tink. Love it! XD
Tamha chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
This was sweet and silly, I like it a lot!
Rosel chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Awwwwwwwwwe. This is so adorable!Neal is such an awesome dad. I love that he has some insecurities about giving Henry advice. But the advice he gives is really good and I loved that his advice tied in with him proposing to Emma. That was so sweet and so them! GREAT JOB!
Serpico1986 chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
sweet story, congratulations, i love it. And invite you to read my stories about Henry and Neal too.
Bye