Instant. Favourite.

Jealous, crazy Lorelai was really funny and cringy, but without going so far as to be out of character and unreadable. But then when Luke leads Lorelai upstairs... OMG! Talk about a bait and switch! From deliciously awkward comedy to one of the hottest scenes ever. I mean EVER.

PHEW!

I need a cigarette after reading that and I've never smoked even once in my life. My phone is so hot I have second degree burns on my hands and I'm putting it in the freezer after I finish typing this. Oh, wow. I usually skim or even skip sex scenes, I honestly think most are just awkward (when they don't mean to be) but this was so well written. I mean, the whole thing is, but even excellent writers can struggle to get these scenes right and you, my friend, nailed it. (DIRTY!)

loved this, thanks!

Oh. My. God. Not going to lie, I thought Lorelai’s jealous act was a little over the top at first but wow, one of the best L/L hookup scenes EVER! Like, ever.

This is jealous Lorelai on a whole new level. I love so many parts of this. Lorelai teasing Luke in the nail salon and getting him to hold her hand was so cute. Him getting her to admit she likes him and then telling her about mustard in her hair was hilarious. Also, really enjoyed that it back fired on him a little bit when she made him smell her hair. And lets not forget that ending...wow! Plus Luke wanting to make sure she got home safe and planning their date was so sweet. Thank you for sharing this story!

Wow! Deliciously written! So lightly flowing and then so tense. This was the first of your stories that I've read and I'm really looking forward to more! A new fan - Thank you-

You have a great writing style! Very fun to read! I think you captured their friendship well, especially with the thought of Luke in the nail salon. Hope to read more!

Umm... I'm obsessed with this story!

WOW, best JJ fanfic story I've ever read. Loved it. Loved their connection and how there was practically no dialogue once Luke started to lead her upstairs.

This is the definitive "Luke Danes Sex God" fanfic. Awesome story, especially because Lorelai is the confident sexy Lorelai we know and love.

I miss your stories. Are you ever going to write another Luke/Lorelai story again? It has been way too long since you last wrote one! Please?

That silent scene was incredible! Love his boldness, while sharing shy, nervous stares with a stunned Lorelai. Wahoo!

I absolutely love your stories. But where are you? It's been a long time. Are you giving up on Luke & Lorelai? Please say it isn't so. Tell us that you're working on another wonderful story for us to enjoy.

Please, please post another Luke/Lorelai story. It's bad enough that the show is forever tainted by April and Christopher, but if you've stopped writing Luke and Lorelai that would be even worse than the LLD stupid story-line & the tumbling into bed with the deadbeat dad.

Please continue writing these stories! I love yours best of all fanfiction! Cause I like the transition from friends to couple so much. Will you work on something new?

You are incredibly good with the weird references and awesome banter. Really good stuff!

Loved it, hot and fun story