Sonído, Bala, Shunpo…. Did you research anything about this world? Also, all of your characters are incredibly OOC and you should state so in your summary. Grimmjow itches to fight for the simple thrill of fighting, he’s not the one suggesting you hold back. There is no way any of them would forget their rank, ever. Especially Nnoitra.

Actually, Nnoitra outranks Grimmjow. 1 Starrk 2 Barragan 3 Tier 4 Ulquiorra 5 Nnoitra 6 Grimmjow 7 Zommari 8 Szayel Apporo 9 Aaroniero 10 Yammi. And Szayel could have easily made them gigai that covered up their hollow appearances...

Love the story. It's so hilarious!

Uh Nnoitra actually outranks Grimmjow

I love it! Can't wait to read the next one!

I liked this until the whole Tia/Grimmjow thing.
You portray Szayel and Nnoitra very well, and I love the jobs. Though I am sorry to say that I won't be reading this any longer. Tia/Grimmjow doesn't sail in my boat, and I don't think he would ever like her. Sorry.
~ Shiro ~

that was awesome with the army of hollows and all

oh... god no

i feel so bad 4 fish tank

u need 2 work on your transitions

after that last part 1000 puppies died

frankly in cannon i always just felt bad 4 orihime

ok then, they really r the old married couple

hehehe nice

is he high?