Unbearably sweet, but not in the way that will give you cavities. Loved Ziva's McGee inserts and the Puppy eyed Adonis description, lol!

I really like how this turns out, I must say. Even though, to be honest, I'm struggling with seeing them as friends with benefits in canon, but it's still okay because you managed to make it believable and it didn't feel weird. But what I like the most is the way you had them add the emotional factor into their relationship. It was already there, or it wouldn't have happened in the first place, but the way you made them realize that and accept it and talk about it was what I liked. Which was probably the point of the whole thing, wasn't it, haha... so, yeah, I loved this :)

P.S. ohmygosh how untactful of her to say she'd had better! It's like suddenly dawning in on me that she said it in front of his face, and oh, poor Tony :( but I liked how she later thinks that it's both wrong and right. They should really talk about it *hint, hint* lol :P

This! Adorable and perfect don't even come close to describing how wonderful this is. You've captured their relationship quite accurately, I think. Very in character.

Good chapter, when these two get together, it will be all or nothing for both of them.

Beautiful... Love it, your Ziva is not like the real one and that is the reason I like her...

DANG

I can so see something like that happening in the office and them having to sort it out.

Good peek into their psyches!

ZO MG-this was so good and I loved how I felt all the emotions. Great job on detail!

Awww, I could see this happening too:) great story

Loved it! I love the fact that they were so in character and not too over emotional! Thanks again ;-)