What was it?

Honestly. Petunia had the right idea. Just sit, read, and wait for the inevitable.

Aww, very cute of James and Lily, and poor Lily and Petunia, trying to be presentable when their male counterparts are intent on destruction.

This is good!

An engagement ring! Great job on this little piece! (Well, great job on all the Harry Potter things you've written so far!) Keep up the amazing work!

He was saving up for an engagement ring!

This is very good :) love it so far

I think what hes saving up for is an engagement ring for Lily. Update soon i wanna see how their next er encounter goes

A nice development, their time at the restaurant went downhill real fast. Also you don't have to tell the names on the name tags if they aren't going to be used in the dialog or any part of the story. I may have it's use in later chapters, but you can also write a small phrase in which the reader is reminded who it is, and where they are from. Maybe a little more exchanges between James and Vernon before they left could have been nice too, but we still see the 'ugly' personality of the the man, and how Petunia does nothing to stop him.
I wonder how James will make up for it...

Keep doing what you're doing, so far it's good work :)

Cookie :)