very good story but to short needs more chapters

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I like the story .. Tho I think hermione should kinda grow to like them a little.. It would make things a little complicated with Draco .. Anyway l update soon!

I am sorry. I have been reading it and but got lazy on my story reviews. You are doing a great job...Are planning on doing each book or you planning on doing some time jumps so the pace can be picked up a little.

Fantastic chapter. I feel bad for Hermione and Draco not being able to be together whenever they want. It's clear how close they are and how much they care about one another. - Can't wait to see more!

Really good chapter update...I am not sure how long you plan on making the story but you may want to consider some time jumps with flashbacks to move the story only unless your intial plan is for a longer story following each year of Draco and Hermione school like the books...Just a suggestion.

Now that they are a yr older I would start using the teen hormone thing.
Like, conflict with Pansy, Ron jealousy(if you plan to go there with him),
Ginny will be there also for the next yr so she can help keep Ron in line
if you make Hermione and her friends. Or you could give Nev a crush on
Hermione and Draco get upset. You get the idea. Anyway, just a few ideas
for you. Looking forward to the next update!

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Good chapter...too short...but still good...you had some minor word association problems try to proof it as much as you can...but overall I like the chapter and can't wait to read more...I am glad you are back to updating...

I can't wait to read about the christmas break and the budding romance that will and is developing with Roo and Dash...Update more soon...

poor roo

Oh, I'm sure Severus can find myriad ways to make Ronald's life a living hell. And the beauty of it is, he's supposed to be a bastard to all the non-Slytherins, especially Gryffindor. If Ron were to spend nearly all of his non-class time scrubbing cauldrons and pickling various slimy critter innards, I imagine he'll be too tired to breathe, much less bother Hermione.

Ron seems like quite a nosy little git who is taking entirely too much interest in Hermione's personal affairs. Natural curiosity is one thing, but Ron's constant questions is kind of creepy and intrusive. His nosiness could prove to be a danger unless they find a way to distract Ron and get his nose out of Hermione's business.

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