| Reviews for Just a Dream |
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Cyrus559 chapter 5 . 7/29 Sorry for the lack of review on your last chapter, but here you got one Fun to see Kagome and Inu Yasha together in the Hidden Bureau’s archive, and especially fun was it when the question on whether they were married, came up. But hilarious clever of Kagome to say she was fifteen the demon way, fortunately was the rope a bit longer than that XD At least did the librarians urn out to be more pleasant than many others I assume they could have met. Though, it was a philosophical interesting subject that a powerful demon could send someone forward in time (which is somewhat scientifically possible), but that it was a god’s business when you want to travel back in time (which so far is scientifically impossible)! However, it was very interesting that the jewel in Inu Yasha’s eye was brought up again and that for everyone else, a trip to Makai is close to impossible. Having Inu Yasha and Kagome go there through the jewel could be a vey good topic for another story, I assume that not even Shippo, Sango or Miroku know much about the trip to that place :3 |
Frost Glaive chapter 5 . 7/14 I see Spirit Detective, S-class demons, demon world, and I go YUSUKE URAMESHI! When I saw the first term I freaked out hard 'cause I was pretty sure this isn't a crossover? Which then disappointed me because I really need more demon anime crossovers in my life (can you image a three-way crossover between Yu-Yu-Hakusho, InuYasha, and Kimetsu no Yaiba? I would die from excitement). Anyway, I'm really enjoying this all over again, and I'm glad you're back to work on this fic :) thanks a bunch |
Cyrus559 chapter 4 . 6/18 Hehe, while Sango, Miroku and Shippo have their own mystery, Inu Yasha is trying to figure out his first paid job as mr. Higurashi! I loved that one : ) I especially enjoyed the Bonus scene at the end where you explained what Inu yasha did wrong regarding NOT knocking people out, that was hilarious XD The other highly amusing scene was of course Inu Yasha who simply resorted to carry the young man outside, by lifting the guy ABOVE his head, what a show. You really put yourself in respect when you show off like that, and in such a non-voilent way too. Looking forward to your next update |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/16 This is such a fun fic! So many vivid interesting characters to take in. I can’t wait for the next update |
Cyrus559 chapter 3 . 5/31 This was, and certainly still is, one of my favorite chapters of yours. My deepest sympathies goes to Inu Yasha who got his first exposure to modern shopping, I feel the same every time I walk into a clothe store myself! But what a great scene it made for the omake you wrote at the end, way to go XD But what is new this time? it has been a while since I read your original story, but was Kagome's string of holy power new or was it there to begin with? The agents of the Hidden Bureau still seems so arrogant that it is funny to see them being waltzed over by Inu Yasha and Kagome, fun then, and fun now Maybe you could include a little showdown between Kagome and one of their agents as well? I am looking forward to read the next chapter you update : ) |
Cyrus559 chapter 2 . 5/17 Reading your story again is great I think I am going to read the chapters again while you reopload the story and enjoy it one more time. P.S. Was your Omake a part of the original story by the way? I can't recall reading it. |
vapourtrailreads chapter 1 . 4/30 awe. hope the renovation goes well! |
princessbinas chapter 18 . 11/29/2018 Definitely a great ending. Good news for Yuka, she still gets to see Kagome when she returns every now and again because of the double life Kagome lives through. Priestess in the past, school girl in the future. I wish you luck with the clean up. Hopefully you have had enough time to develop a fresh set of eyes for the job. A fresh set of eyes help a lot with catching minor writing mistakes. |
Emocean chapter 18 . 11/16/2018 How cute! |
AM78 chapter 16 . 11/16/2018 Seems like the story it getting a little sidetracked here. I was kind of thinking the events on the other side of the well would get a higher priority at this point, seeing as how a girl is literally dying and there will be massive repercussions for everyone if she croaks. Not really the time for Kagome to by partying. |
AM78 chapter 15 . 11/8/2018 Not sure I agree with the outcome of the conflict with Yuka and her parents. To me, Yuka was clearly in the wrong here. Her father may be overbearing, but since he isn't physically abusive, I really don' think she had valid grounds to run away like that and leave him for days without knowing where she was. That just seemed excessively cruel, and for her to get off completely without accountability for doing so just didn't feel right. |
AM78 chapter 14 . 11/4/2018 I gotta say I'm disappointed with Sango's performance here. I was hoping she'd play a key role in solving the mystery of why the well wasn't working, but all she's done was make the situation worse. I hope she gets a chance to redeem herself later. It was kind of funny how Yuka just instantly accepted Kagome's time travel explanation as soon as she heard it. I would think she'd need some proof first. Still it is nice how Yuka is getting such a big role in this story. I always do like it when the more obscure characters of a series get some extra time in the spotlight. |
AM78 chapter 13 . 11/4/2018 I love how Kagome was so nonchalant about the kidnap attempt. That seems like just the reaction she would have, especially when she knows Inuyasha is right there to pound the guys into submission. Also I found the events with Yuka at the end interesting. I didn't expect new plot arcs to be opening up this late in the story. |
AM78 chapter 12 . 11/4/2018 So many big reveals in this chapter, and I'm loving it all. I still don't get how Sachi related to the group's inability to use the well, but i'm sure that will be discovered all in due time. |
AM78 chapter 11 . 11/4/2018 Well this chapter revealed a lot of big things, most notably that the hidden bureau has a dark side. I didn't expect that, but it's a nice surprise. Up to this point they seemed 100% unobjectionable, but now not so much. Also the meeting with I&K was quite touching and very effectively written. Well done. |