i love this! i know you haven't updated in a while, but i really hope you update again soon, i would love to read more of this story! also i absolutely looooove holly, she's awesome, lol.

I don't know what it is, but something is up with Anne... Because their is no Jennifer to be the Darach, I think Anne might be it. Sorry I have a inkling. But other then that, this story is superb and Holly's character is excellent!

Oooo, this is amazing so far. I love it! Onto the next chappie.

Wow. The story is phantastic so far. please continue. .

Ack! We're getting so close to the end!

The first few bits of Derek's POV had me quivering with anticipation of the despair and anxiety. Eeek! Poor Derek! Poor Holly!

I like your description of Holly's ailing body. She sounded pretty gross. Death is a bitch on the beauty. Heehee..

I guess I'm just way too literal because when you mentioned the bite possibly coming because Derek was backed in a corner...well, I actually pictured him backed in a corner. I'm dumb, I know.

I'm excited how you're going to squeeze Holly into the ending. I definitely like seeing the scenes between but still feeling the tv show story line attached to everything. I don't know what to expect, but I hope there is some crazy talk between Anne and Holly. Oh, and now that Holly has super wolfy powers, there just might be some badassery going on. Woohoo!

cant wait to read more

Great chapter! I cannot wait to read more.

good update

I love it. So much tension and just Au enough to be interesting but not completely off from the show. I'm so excited for more!

cant wait to read more

I knew Anne was trouble! I knew it!

The couples reunion was heart fluttering. The blow up fight maybe even more heart fluttering.

Love that every avenue of terrible information Derek tried to go down, Holly was able to cut him off because Deaton gave her everything without holding back. Ha! Take that Derek!

I also love, love, love, love...hmm..yeah, one more love the idea of the Darach doing what she's doing as a kind of ritual worship to Holly. That really ties Holly into the show story much more closely. It also gives her personal danger that isn't just because she happens to know a guy who is a werewolf. Awesome.

I suspected that Anne was the Darach, but now I'm very curious about how this was all for Holly and why Anne stabbed her. And if Holly will be ok.

This is a really well put-together story. I enjoy Holly; I like her interactions not just with Derek but with the others, like Cora. I like how she starts adding to his apartment, making it more homey, and that she reached out to Peter and encouraged him to try harder to be in the pack. It's nice to see the in-between moments rather than I direct replay of the show. Although, part of me was really hoping Boyd would survive.

I hope you'll update soon. This is quite the cliffhanger!

Ahh! This is getting so intense. I love the world you've built up! She's an amazing oc and her relationship with Derek has been really well thought out. I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!

Continue soon please