Can we really say that it's a second sword?
For all that we know it's could be Milanor Axe or something. BTW love the plot

AMAZING! XD very cute undine love i never saw it coming. Millinor covering Elena eyes XD beautiful. Next chapter ASAP please i love this fanfiction!

Hey, long time no see, I appreciate that you keep continuing with the story and I hope you can post another chapter soon.
Until the next time.
P.D: The scene of Milanor and Elena and that omake made my day XD.

wow great storyline, once again great story, . i have seen many plot for the flow of your storyline. still alive!? cause i thought he die thats why Aegina run safe her life.
2nd Bly ? well never know this guy ..., Platina is sick? how? guess the answer from this Bly figured like made Platina feel weak , like those strange soup to make her feel comfort to sleep so Platina cant see the true situation.
3rd. 2 holy weapon? well thats messiah plot to planning something .
4th. How milanor past ? royal vanir blood? granted with second holy sword?

yeah thats all i can asume from your and i agree u will doing well , dont rush , or play the game again to give more idea for your storyline. iam waiting for next chapter. " Divine Empress loved by, The Phoenix Mulminams, Bring light to, Darkness of Chaos!.

Inzaghi for the win, I just hope that Ortega isn't on m..I mean Inzaghi's tail.

I'm certainly not Inzaghi, the real Inzaghi has better things to do then to visit fanfiction, and eat ice cream late at night, why I'm sure the real Inzaghi is taking care of that wretched Silver Wolf right now

Where is chapter 4? I love this fanfic T_T please more cute scenes with aegina XD

It's kinda good, really, don't know if what made me actually squeal

Keep this going, I want to see Milano's assassins harem. XD

Your job is awesome as ever and keep geating better and better chapter 4 pleaseeeeee more your talented :D

I eagerly look forward too seeing the assassins... or just more Elena. She's hilarious. Can't wait to see how you're going to portray all the other card effects too.

While the interactions between Milanor, Aegina and Elena was golden, I feels as if that Aegina is falling for Milanor waaaayyyy too fast, even when one take into account the fact that Milanor saved Aegina AND that "If I help you, you'll become mine" deal.

Still a nice chapter. Especially the part where Aegina's mouth went out of control. (The fact that "I'm not ready for this yet" come after "There are people watching" and "There is always a time and place for everything" gave me the feelings that she's already considering it.

Canon was already a tear jerking fest without having close bonds with the enemies

Now? Milanor will be lucky if he doesn't snap under the pressure

Me thinks Milanor KNOWS of Nessiah's plans and stole the Gran Centurio to screw him over. But the issue is that while Gran CAN break Nessiah's chains and cancel the reincarnation effect killing a full powered Nessiah is a hella of a task

Welp and the Vanir had so much Magitech Hax an ANGEL was send to wipe them out by Asgard, notice not Fantasinia, VANIR were strong enough to shrug Fantasia with her Gran Centurio and Nessiah as support. Those guys were badasses

Looks like Milanor's Vanir heritage is going to be a major factor in this story.

Also, I can't wait to find out what happened to Yggdra. On one hand, she seems to be very frail and fragile right now. On the other hand, some of her thoughts seems ... off. (Like "Her knight, he would never betray her" in italics)

Sweet, I have been waiting for so long and this chapter has finally come _

The first part is short and simple, yet nice. So Luciana saved Aegina, with the exchange of her own life, that really deepened Aegina's pain of being the sole survivor. She had the mixture of sadness, doubt and bravery, and the heart of a young girl, but also she is very green despite her disposition, or Milanor was just too experienced ))

Yggdra was shown to be a complex character too, strained and really worn out, at some point fragile and emotional, also she loved her sisters strongly. That left me wonder if Yggdra was still that kind of person, why Milanor left her, and why she invaded Bronquia.

The plot is good, seems like there is a whole lot of secrets to find out. Your writing style is fluent and descriptive, which is a good thing, but I guess it won't hurt to describe the characters' emotions and thoughts a little more, dig deeper in their mind, so on ))

Geez, I'm really degraded when it comes to reviewing fictions of my second language, I usually did better with fiction written in my mother tongue, so I guess there's not many things to say, but overall I love this fic *thumb up*. Keep up the good work, I'm waiting for the next chapters

Awesome work sir you are natural talented