No shit is that a real fact?

Kit is Foxes and Pup is Wolves

Oh my god... Narumi better not be no fuckin' Yandere! She deserves to die if she is!
Also like the Minato x Mikoto action.

Nul comme fiction jai rien compris

Your truly a good person for adopting. Enjoyed the fanfic

Why have u abandoned the story ? It is such a great story .. update if u can

This was a mess

make more chapters please

supert

nice one, gonna follow this story.

I can't quite grasp Narumi and particularly Naruto's motivation.
so far he'd mention Narumi, vengeance, to protect, to be the strongest, acknowledgement. all while saying one thing and denying the other to several people. I hope you did this intentionally.

and, you could use some beta reader.

Alright I've read enough. Shove that weak Naruto and canon shit right back up your ass.

You should put a page break when you jumped from the prison break plan, to talking to Kabuto.

your a fucking idiot konoha haters are thevscum of the earth haters should die and spot spouting there hatefull shit to everyone making naruto join orochimaru really? maybe you should go fuck yourself

Excellent story i really hope to see more updates on this

Seems I was right with my first review.