No more chapters? You stopped? Why?
Sighhh. Yet unfinished beautiful story. Shame really

lol i like ur story i hope the next part comes soon. since u want ur readers ideas heres mine. put diana and leona on the same team but both in the bot lane.(the summoners wanted to try a new tactic) while diana is focus leona keeps getting distracted. not noticing the incoming gank by naut she get luanched into the air only to be caught and carry by diana. she get flustered and panics until Diana say "Don't worry I got you" Then after the match Leona runs as fast as she can only to bump into panth who notice how red she is. hope this works for you. sorry if its just a waste of time hope your next chapter comes soon.

You! I love you oh my God! Aside from having one of my OTPs as the fic's main pairings-you went and placed Kat and Ashe and that's like my top 1 thanks to Wounded hahah

Oh God that made me so happy haha xD more more please! I need to know more of the Sun and Moon and Sinister Frost!

oh god that was an absolutely adorable chapter, ah the way Diana was acting after being examined, lil Kitty being a scatter brain infront of Ashe and Leona watching an adorable Diana sleeping

I like the way you portrayed Pantheon, I find it pretty realistic, and if you liked wounded you'd like guiding light so I recommend that to you :D

I've enjoyed this story so far and feel it deserves further attention. The favorite is deserved despite the relative simplicity of the story itself.

In this vein, I'm going to go ahead and give a critical analysis of the story.

The characters may seem somewhat OOC compared to what we see in-gam but it should be noted that if the characters were as they are in combat as out, they'd be severely mentally traumatized. It is with that understanding that I find the characters to be relatively humanized so far.

In regards to Diana and Leona, I think you've taken IronStylus' quote to heart. "How do you kill someone you love?" Well the truth is, in many cases, you can't. This combined with the fact that IronStylus and the other development staff were very

hey, you're continuing! i like your start. very well paced.

So far, I like your story. It definitely has potential to be something really great. AND you also made my second favourite pairing in LoL, which adds serious bonus points. Keep it up!

I found very few mistakes (I think I read persons once around), but those do not obstruct reading in the least, so it's just a small heads up.

Now, to the juicy part of this rather short review. You said you wanted challenges? I wanted to give you a VERY biased Katarina/Akali one, but since you went with the Passage Ak/Nid, I'll give you an unexpected one.

VaynexAhri.

Yeah, you read right. Go read that again.

It popped in my head a while ago and I've been trying to make it work in my travel-to-work time. Now, I pass the torch to you.
Make it happen!

As I said, keep it up!
Later,
Soulcry.

I think younshould keep on writing this story :) it is actually quite good

HAHAH! more please ! The chars seem 'in' character lol. would love to see some more :D

I've got no objections for an OOC Pantheon. Anything that involves Leona gets a greenlight from me.

May the world feel the Sun's glory! Oh, and the Moon also rises ;O.

very good :)

Cool story! Really like the way everyone interacts!

Wow! Your writing style is fantastic and so descriptive! I actually really like how you characterized both Pantheon and Diana. It would be illogical for him to act like the "artistan of war" in front of close friends and making Diana mysterious and distant instead of a cold hearted bitch is refreshing. I hope to read more of this story, good job.

I enjoyed your story very much. Especially the pantheon part; for the reason that characters are not one dimensional. Just because he is the artisan of war does that mean that every single action he takes in warlike, even eating soup? Of course not, how the hell does one eat soup in a warlike way? Dammed if I know, I hope you decide to continue the story.