Reviews for The Space Race
Hankton chapter 20 . 12/14/2019
these pov switches are annoying
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2019
Hu
mckertis chapter 1 . 11/15/2019
Pandering to sexual deviant scum is a point in favor of USA ? Really ?
Divine Protector of Skyrim chapter 42 . 12/2/2018
Hey. This is amazing. I took a peak at some of your other stories, and it seems that you haven’t been updating anything for like 2 years now. I’ll say this: you’re amazing writer, with amazing ideas. Don’t let them stew around and be forgotten. If you need help with anything send me a pm. I’d love to help you out with this or anything really.

~fin~
Guest chapter 12 . 6/7/2018
These people's, humanityand their first allies', government feel like they are very primitive what with their inability to prevent crime and even huge criminal organizations from existing, I realize that's what mass effectis like, but then again that's mass effect, these are your original characters and civilizations. The story is reeeeally good thougn, so even though this is a review on a story that is 5 years old/unupdated and the review mostly doesn't matter anymore, really, good job.
Ilireanwri chapter 41 . 4/10/2018
Tis story is awesome. I really hope you'll continue it and your other stories
Bob the Turtle chapter 4 . 2/18/2018
US Grenadiers...US Grenadiers? I would think the British would have a unit such as that and not the Americans. If he was say US Army Rangers then sure. Other than that, I wish General Corsev's uniform wasn't all red here and looked more like the real world Red Army general uniform.

Other than that bit of nitpicking this seems like a good fic. Can't wait to continue reading.
polygon chapter 6 . 10/25/2017
aaaaand this where I stop reading. An alliance with the dicks that tried to kill them? no .
AnthonyR89 chapter 28 . 7/13/2017
kind of surprised you went with subway, never been my favorite place, even before the scandal with Jared. of the major chains, i always preferred Togo's. miss it now that i live in PA.
AnthonyR89 chapter 3 . 7/12/2017
kind of surprised you have them helping the turians fighting the chryssalids, considering you just stated that they would only target the turians, and no one else.
AnthonyR89 chapter 2 . 7/12/2017
also, iirc, Turians don't have Admirals. they just have generals, not distinguishing between naval and army/marine ranks.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/6/2017
Sooo... couldn't outright put in Chryssalids huh? DAmn terror missions.
Deathstrokenator chapter 1 . 5/23/2016
I wonder, if the USSR and the USA are the ones going into space and with no Systems Alliance, what with the other nations? You know, the other 70% of Earth
AkiraWolf98 chapter 33 . 3/9/2016
Correction: That was amazingly good!

And I love the role that the Turians have been taking as of late. Good job thinking ahead Wrex!
AkiraWolf98 chapter 28 . 3/9/2016
Reaches the End of Page: That is either really really good. Or Really Really bad.
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