this is never gonna get updated but if youre out there 3

Bruh one of the greatest tragedies ever is that this was abandoned. Makes me want to cry Ngl, magma Krystal if you're out there, you don't even have to come back just tell us why you left or how you're doing, this is the greatest fanfiction I've read and helped me discover my sexuality. Thanks for being so important to me

I’m not sure I’ve ever reviewed this despite having this be my favourite fanfic of all time? What can I say really, except that this is just heartbreakingly beautiful; the way Maxie is crafted as a character is so compelling, and I can see how all of this horrible stuff that happened to him could have forged him into the man we see running team magma, yet he still stays kind! Honestly this fanfiction has made me cry multiple times, and it’s one of the only ones that can really suck me into its world and not make me want to leave; unless it’s to heal my wounds with art of Maxie being happy and loved.

I just love this fanfic since it came out, and never got a chance to finish reading it.
I just wanted to show some gratitude to magma-krystal by turning this into an ePub (it's the first time I did it, so sorry about the white background. But you should be able to read it in white. You'll get what I mean)
And yeah, I kind of made a cover for this. It's all here: /f/s!AmrvhSaoW6WXlD_dYaF-eXGaooHW
Enjoy reading, and thanks again, magma-krystal!

I love this book. I’ve been reading it since it was created, and I jsut love it sm ahandjsjekdk-
Even though hardenshipping’s been dead af,, I love it sm and I hope you keep up the great work 33333

This is really well written :0
If you still use , I’d really love to see one last chapter or two where the storyline’s left off at a happy ending. I cried on the last chapter ;v;

this is really good. Are you ever going to continue it? and if not, then can you recomend anything?

This whole fic is honestly one of the best I've ever read. I don't know if you still use this account, but I'd love to see more when you have time. I constantly go back re-read this fic every few months or so just because the characters are so in-sync and accurately portrayed. Really good job on this!

Maxie is one of my favourite villains.
Thank you for creating this story. It was amazing :D

I really like this story, and maybe it's just me but I really want you to continue it! I'm generally not a fan of Pokémon but this was a cool story. To be continued?

Please write more! I've been waiting so anxiously for the next chapter, this story is so well developed!

Why has Archie to be the bad guy in every fic? ;_; Anyways I loved it, need more! Pls update :D

Good gravy, this is one of the most refreshing and interesting fanfics I have read in a looooong time! I am so happy to have cone across it! I hope you still have the spark for this one, 'cause it's one helluva ride and I'm ready for more!

Please, please update I need more, it's been awhile since I read as beautiful fanfiction as this one was. My major otp as of right now and I need more of a fix of them.

Oh, please please please continue it, I've gotta know how they form Teams Magma and Aqua, and what happens next!