We're cool with the reference but did Shizuoka have to say it? How does she know Shawn Michaels? I'm only alright with seeing references to modern people in stories when it's a crack fic

that was good keep the chapters coming

another good story when i read the summary it was the same as another of this pairing but it wasn't the same story but it was awesome also

awesome need moar chapters instead of 1 but noice

Your story is the bomb dude you are awesome man

NICE

Love the Shawn Michaels reference "DC316". That alone shows me what a hardcore wrestling fan you are and also that nothing is safe from your razor sharp sense of humor.

The love scenes (as expected in the Icha Icha series), were off the chain as usual. Though I must say I'm surprised you didn't include the "spoons" position which seems to be a recurring theme in your stories. Believe me it's a much better sexual posture than when someone uses your face as a bicycle seat (ewww!).

I'm just curious did you have Naruto and Shizuka kill off that interloper Kokuyo for interrupting their battle. I don't know about you but it's high time Mr. Delusional got the hint and take scrawny butt and his freaky puppets and get gone.

Oh and I would be remiss if I didn't mention the awesome battle scene with Naruto and Shizuka. Usually you only get this type of intense showdown when the opponents in question are mortal enemies, so I was happy that Shizuka was able to go toe to toe with my boy Naruto and show him that kunoichis are not to be taking lightly lest you find yourself six feet under.

Now before I sign off I just have to know: what was your inspiration when you did the Icha Icha chapter for the smart but ill tempered Sakura? I was thinking of reading this next to see how you handle Naruto getting to finally fulfill his wish and pork the pink haired maiden till her eyes glaze over in mind numbing pleasure. Even though I'm a die hard NaruHina fan I'm open to see the keeper of the Nine Tails bonk every kunoichi in the Naruto universe (except for Tsunade for obvious reasons, yuck!)

Until next time, this is SV33 signing off!

Lucky ass motherf...

Hey this was a good and enjoyable read, keep up the good work!

Love the story. Make a story where naruto screws a uncouinsios drunk sakura in a closed bar.

I absolutely loved this fics. It was hot and arrousing. Shizuka is one hell of a kunoichi that Naruto would be stupid to pass on.

Have I mentioned that I like NaruShizuka?...because I do XD another great addition to your Icha Icha series DarkChild, Jiraiya would be proud lol

All redheads are angels descended from heaven...as red hair is a mutation that's not supposed to exist in the human chromosomes...so therefore all redheads exist because there angels who have chosen to take on human form...yep thats totally it...(you lucky jerk)...cant wait too see your next chapter...(so jealous)...later!

Finally I fiund you again, I love this lemon, and I never guess that was your inspiration, good job dude, anyway can't wait for the naruto series

I think that I just reviewed twice saying the same thing bothe times, sorry if I did.