Reviews for Retribution
CharLeneXX chapter 12 . 6/14
I think I already reviewed this chapter, but I wasn't signed in, so if you can respond, can you respond to this review? Thanks.
CharLeneXX chapter 12 . 6/13
I really liked this, but the separation lines or whatever doesn't work, so I can't seem to follow the storyline. Please continue with this series! ( when I say that I mean what happens to Alex when he meets the Coalition?)

P.S. Quick question, are you female or male? ( don't take this as an insult, I just want to know)
P.P.S. If I have any grammar or punctuation errors, please don't take any notice of them, I'm still in primary school.
Guest chapter 12 . 6/12
Turning over a new leaf huh ...it’s been a little over a year since your last update
Em0Wolf chapter 12 . 6/12
it’s probably been a while since you updated, but... pretty please can i have an update? this is one of my favourite series, i love it so much and i really wanna know how it goes down with the coalition, and also i’m super excited to see if alex and wolf ever get back together...
Guest chapter 12 . 6/7
It's been 1 year when u updating?
Paufa chapter 12 . 2/17
Great chapter! I really love the idea of Alex having a mini army of young protégés. This story has really great potential. Great job!
Guest chapter 12 . 1/29
I need the end to this story. I need more wolf and alex. Great story
Guest chapter 12 . 1/15
This story is amazing! Are you going to continue it? I’m more of a newbie when it comes to fan fiction and this is like the third time I’ve read the entire series. I would love for Wolfie to appear in the next chapter ; ) And this may be a bit weird, but I feel like not many people (Tom, Matt, David (hopefully that’s the name) have seen Alex’s scars and it would be cool to reference them again. Thanks
otterpineapple06 chapter 1 . 6/7/2019
Absolutely love this it is sooooo well written and the plot is brilliant and pretty much everything is amazing
Guest chapter 12 . 6/6/2019
3 3 i dont know if i can log into my account anymore but really wanted to say that you are makig me so happy by continuing your story. I think its awesome that you are back and i cant wait for more. Seeing this story updated has inspired me to go and read all your other stories again. I love it and you are one of my fave writers :) :)
negligibleSanity chapter 12 . 6/5/2019
Glad to see Alex and David looking okay, though who knows what Snake's tests will turn up... Hopefully nothing bad. Alex deserves some very nice things after the crap he's been through.

Looking forward to more!
0Ailsa0 chapter 12 . 6/5/2019
I never did review after the last chapter to say how pleased I am that you're continuing this fic! This chapter was brilliant as always, looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Mcfries chapter 11 . 5/29/2019
! An update! I'm so glad! This story is really interesting and teacher!Alex kind of warms my heart even though he's been through the ringer. Cold hearted assassin my ass, he's definitely delved into full on "dont ever talk to me and my kids ever again" memehood LMAO

Looking forward to more of this fic! Thanks for sharing!
Guest chapter 11 . 5/28/2019
THIS LITERALLY MADE MY DAY AHHH SO GLAD YOU UPDATED CANT WAIT TO READ MORE
adriftuponaseaoftime chapter 11 . 5/28/2019
Hello! I'll have to go read the prequels again but I'll make sure I leave a review when I catch up. - Welcome back!
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