I take back my last review. This is exactly the reaction I hate.

Thank you so much for Harry's reaction to the whole duel. There are far too many fics where something like that - not treating him like his own person - happens, and he just shrugs it off. For once he actually refused to just ignore it, and I'm very glad. Interesting story btw.

What the hell Hermione?!
She has tried to see Harry naked several times, without his permission, he's been nothing but honourable in terms of trying not to see her, or any other girl, naked, and she calls him a pervert? Hypocritical, much?
Not surprised Fleur is being a bitch - hope she gets some comeuppance.

I didn't know this story was a farce/parody.

Unfortunately it's probably a good thing that you're no longer writing HP stories. You've turned both Hermione and her mother into 2nd rate whores albeit for understandable (Hermione) and semi-almost-understandable (Emma) reasons, turned Harry into a girl for no good reason whatsoever, and Sirius is a mentally deficient moron. I'm sticking to the story though because the quality of the writing, if not the characterization, is really good. But yeah, if you're so tired of the HP fandom that you've fucked up the characters to this point, yeah, it's time to quit.

Why is Hermione's dad always murdered these types of fics?

Hopefully this experience convinces Emma that she needs to speak to someone.

Realizing that Sirius is typically immature and this one hasn’t had time to heal from Azkaban, but what an absolute asshole. I’m rooting for Harry learning about the potions and cheering charms and throwing a punch correctly this time. With Emma’s issues at the moment, if Remus wasn’t there, Harry would be the closest thing to a responsible adult in the house.

Please. What happens in the 2nd book ? Does harry forgive Hermione and flore? Does flora meet someone else? Does serious and Emma get back together? U can't end it here!

I like the concept of the story, and how it actually flows is really good.
But, you did Harry and Emma Dirty.
I love a good Harmony fic, but this is fucking ridiculous. I get Harry doesn't actually know what love is, but he wouldn't do that or simply follow along how he is now. He is a stubborn hard headed guy. He'd actually be heard, and Hermione wouldn't actually be this whiny or frivolous. She is lvl headed and a bit headstrong, but she'd actually follow the talks she'd have with her mother about what she was doing, she wouldn't be well like she is in your story. It is annoying tbh how she is acting, because she'd honestly be in the same boat as Harry. She'd be shy but a little daring with small kisses and cuddles. Just kinda slamming them into it kinda pains me. And everything with Fleur is just plain annoying honestly.
And how you are manipulating Emma and hurting her so much kinda kills the story for me. Especially how she fell for Sirius so easily and fast.

But besides that, the story is really good, but I couldn't continue to read it with the whole life debt with Fleur an her demand on what she gets.
Again, they didn't ask for Harry's opinion, they literally manhandled him to awkwardly agree and didn't explain shit when it's something so fucking crucial to his life.

The girls did push to hard. He seems happy!

So very many idiots . At least Harry finally shows a feeble trace of backbone. Probably temporary considering a sequel. I thoroughly expect Harry to regress into the flobberworm category once again if he meets up with I'll do all the thinking Granger and I'll turn you into a drooling idiot Delacour.

I find the behavior of Sirius and Hermione really dissatisfactory.
Sirius has the Dementor's care as an explanation of his lack of thinking, but he really did a great disservice to Emma. Comfort did not need to head into this direction. It shouldn't. Also, it's a weird direction from Emma too. That cheering charm should not be enough for this. How can anyone accept any normal teenager advice from a parental figure like that, Hermione could take it like 'let's shag right now Harry' after this get into her knowledge disregarding any directions or 'the talk'.

Hermione is often berating Harry, making it harder for him to blend in and uttering secrets in unsafe locations. Really, where did her intellect go? If I was in Harry's situation, I would not like this. Her character feels unlikeable unless it's about body attractions.

poor emma

busted XD