That was gorgeous. I loved the dialogue, "would you come with me if I jumped?" It was so beautiful, even more so when Yorda knew that Ico couldn't understand her.

When i played ICO i was often watching the land behind the bridge. I really wished to be free. You wrote it so well.

This was beautiful. Just plain beautiful.

I love your characterizations, particularly of the mostly silent Yorda. You provided her with a lot of depth that we don't really get to see in the game. Also, your poetic writing is captivating! Keep up the great work!

Sweet, well written, and a wonderful portrayal of Yorda. I really enjoyed it!

You are correct, it was sad.. But it was cute, and for a minute I thought she was going to fall. I've beat the game and I own both Shadow of the Colossus and Ico. This is an amazing story, amazing job :)

Uh, YES! It was SO depressing looking at the other side of the bridge and wondering if you'd ever get over there again. I felt that even looking at the forest, too, not just the exit to the castle. You captured the emotions so well, and I love how you write from Yorda's POV because I always wanted to know what she was thinking and see what kind of person she was. I can't even really think what else to say to express how much I liked the story. Maybe I'm tired. Anyway, great work! Please keep writing more Ico stories when you get more ideas!