Awskme u are a amzing writer man

loved it bro

Most impressive. It would be cool if you make a Devil May Cry x Black lagoon crossover

That was Epic

I'am impressed with Revy. She is growing

That was deep

Very good, I enjoyed it.

Love the raw unprotected sex scene

Chapters! Lemon Scenes! Action!f

I love it. Please add more chaprers

Don't end the story so soon it is awesome. At least end it after chapter 15. I love the lemon scene. You did extremly well for your first time. I look forward to more lemon scenes in your stories.

You should make another story where Rock have a mysrterous past. A bit overpowered. A powerful and extremely sword master with a advanced blade that is designed to deflect high caliber Bullets and can heat its self up to increase it's slicing power. Rock is also Mute or taken a vow of silence. Rock was a former child mercarnary that was known as the Silent Bloody Devil.

How do you like the idea?

You should finsh the story after 2 to 5 more chapters and write another story or/both a sequel to this story.

Wow. I,am completely impressed with the lemon scene. It was Hot, steamy, and Passionate. You did outstanding for your first Lemon scene. Keep the lemon scenes coming.

I like this story a lot. Can't wait to continue. The three of them on a mission works for me.