Wow, great job with this! You did an excellent job with writing the deductions out, and overall I think that both of them were completely in character. The plot is pretty funny as well, and I just loved all of it. Amazing job overall!

I like it :)

Aw, that was amazing, :) I really like fics like these, where Sherlock is being an arrogant know-it-all, haha. I still can't get over that, though: "[...] You're the girlfriend." You're right - associating Sherlock with girlfriend is pretty odd, but it makes sense in context, I suppose.
Keep on writing!

Love it! An amazing short story! (: