That was awesome! I love angst and dunno why... But that was great!

Really really good!

I don't think this was "terrible," though you do make some spelling errors and such here and there; confusing "faint" with "feint" in one instance, for example. Just be careful of little things like that and your fics will be much better. Aside from that, I found the premise of this interesting...I think in the bad future, Robin managed to resist Grima just long enough to give Falchion to Lucina? Unless I misunderstood something XD I thought it was cool, in any case :D

Gah! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY.
At least it's a happy ending... a bittersweet happy ending.

Love it!

My problem with this story is that Falchion can't be wielded by anyone outside of Chrom's lineage; otherwise, the blade is dull and can't cut through anything (which can be seen in supports between Lucina sibling). You might also want to practice using commas and other punctuation. Other than a few mechanical mistakes and Falchion, this was a pretty good story. c:

this was not terrible
I liked it
i always wondered how Lucina got the Falchion
excellent job
peace

Huh, I'd say this was actually pretty good. I'm hoping there's more...

*sniffle* It's so sad! I Think I'm going to go cry now... I feel so bad for poor, poor EVERYONE! D:

Nice :)