| Reviews for The Fourth's Legacy |
|---|
   kristinalprime23 chapter 7 . 4/25 um what about ryuzetsu |
| Crossxx chapter 1 . 2/5/2019 Grate first chapter it really pulled me into the story. I love it. |
| gabelou1991 chapter 10 . 7/25/2018 J'aime bien ton histoire . |
| EL SEOR DE LA NOCHE chapter 10 . 2/15/2018 Hi, I'm sorry if I upset you, but I would like to ask for your consent to translate and continue your fanfic |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/9/2017 Sunset is when the sun goes down at the end of the day. SUNRISE is when the Sun comes up at Dawn. Also, "weary" tired & should be replaced with "wary" (meaning cautious) in parts of your story. |
| Hellhound monster girl lover chapter 7 . 5/27/2017 karui |
| Hellhound monster girl lover chapter 5 . 5/27/2017 where is Shino |
| haremkingnaruto chapter 9 . 5/10/2017 Fuck ye-EEEP! I shouldn't swear Eh who gives a fuck |
| haremkingnaruto chapter 3 . 5/10/2017 kakashi can sum up anything naruto does with a girl in one word "SHIT" |
| my 2 guys chapter 10 . 11/23/2015 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| demonzone2571 chapter 1 . 10/14/2015 I'll adopt this story. Just send me the story via email: |
| Korog the Oversoul chapter 3 . 8/11/2015 Bravo, excellent, wonderful, your prose, ideas, and interpretation of the characters are phenomenal, however I think I begin to see the problem you have/had. Naruto is leaning towards the too strong side, as well as the point where some would expect him to crap marble and gold, too little flaws that make him human, but it could be offset by having some characters -cough Sakura cough- claim that Naruto's altruistic and humanitarian acts stem from selfishness, as well as Naruto having some kind of rage button, like Ed Elric's complex about his height, or Mei Terumi's penchant for having innocent words that leave Ao's mouth cause her to feel like he is calling her an old hag or something. But if you read this review you might be able to continue the story yourself, even though I would love to adopt this fic. |
| Korog the Oversoul chapter 2 . 8/11/2015 In the outlines for my fics Itachi took out some aggressors,( Self-Defense) while Danzo, Obito, and some ROOT members killed 98% Itachi kills Fugaku after Mikoto (That's the name of Sasuke's mom, right?) learns about the coup and Fugaku attempts to shut his "wife" up and get the Mangekyo, and Itachi kills Fugaku to avenge his mother. And Itachi plans for Sasuke to kill him, due to having a terminal illness, |
| theaceoffire chapter 1 . 3/7/2015 You may wish to fix this typo: "But no one remembered him having a soon" _ I found it humorous, but you will likely wanna fix it. |
| Asumawhy chapter 10 . 1/11/2015 i am kinda sad that this story is not being written anymore but the reason for it is understandable |
