Good thanks for sharing

ive found a way to pass my time ;-)

Beautiful story

This is trash if this were Lucy it would be good but the gay shit is trash

I love how it was so touching but at the same time hilarious
It’s three in the morning right now and I cracked up laughing

Holy fuck

Dammit
You have a real talent for making people cry with your stories ya know?
The first chapter was heartbreaking

I litterly laughed for like 10 mins cause of this.

Well, relax. I'm not gonna shoot flames up your ass."

"You sure as hell better not! Knowing you, you could."

"You know, our first time, I half expected your cum to turn into ice inside of me."

"I've been known to do that, ya know.

Im going to skip through all this stuff.

this is soo tragic.

Please write this without the bits, if you know what i mean(the scenes were Natsu is being raped and all).

love it

Like the story mostly, well written but too much erotica for me XD

Well, that was heavy on the sex. The story was good but I'd have loved to have more frame to it. As it is now it seems like you put in just enough plot to make the sex work. In that sense well done ;)
Your writing improved as the story progressed. Some perspective shifts where a little rough in the beginning, they got smother in the later chaps, the amount of showing vs telling as well.

I liked the comedy, the banter between Gray and Natsu was on point, Happy as well, as I said before. Natsus recovery felt well paced, not to rushed or to dragged out. I recommend you on that one! In most post-rape stories the way the MC deals with the issue feels either forced or neglected, so I am glad that you let have Natsu all the time he needed.

Really the only things I could have wished for were that your writing was as good in the beginning as it was at the end and that you included more frame, like showing a scene how and why they took on the quest, maybe how they arrived, flashes of their crush on each other before the mess happend. Or the fight when Natsu got captured, how they researched, what made Lucy reach the conclusion that those men were selling humans, just a few scenes that did not directly revolve around the rape, sex and finally around Gray and Natsu.

Maybe I just want more?

Oh dear, the Happy part at the end really made me laugh tears. It was already good in the anime, but here it is gold.