Yes, I'm a sucker for crossover ships. You've made me love Rita x Aster now.

Still, though, can't help but want to give Aster a hug with everything he's going through. And Rita, why you so mean to him? ...Oh well, she's bound to soften up at some point in the future.

I noticed this fic hasn't updated in a while. I hope it's not dead yet. XP I really am looking forward to what happens next.

There are some but very, very few grammar problems, I'm impressed with this story. The "combat" is good too, I usually don't see many stories with this good quality. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Knowing Yuri, he'll just give the horn to Teagle and Kellus once they got it. I don't know if it'll be the next chapter or the one after the next one, we'll get to see our favorite Old Man!

Also, Aster barely met Flynn, but that's okay I guess.

Update whenever you can, please! w

Nice work as always I look forward to the next chapter.

please keep up the good work.

This is cerrtainly an interesting crossover. Aster may be useless in some ways, but he certainly brings an interesting note to the story. Curiois how far you plan on keeping him in the Vesperia universe, I couldnt imagine throughout the entire adventur.

Aster will get his way with the horn, I just wonder how he'll react once he gets underneath the mansion. I was never a fan of that Estelle and Flynn scene, but thats just how she is with her friends (especially at this point in time when shes finally making more friends besides just Flynn).

Hello long time reader first time reviewing your story

I'll like to say so far I'm not disappointed in thi and considering I never got to play tos2 it's a new addition to me to have aster with the crew of tov and I'm glad because I can't really judge if aster is OOC (not a flame just statement) it actually makes me enjoy it more

The only bad thing I can say is I Linda lose track of where the story left off because of the update time but that I understandable

On a good note is a surprise when I get an update for this! Keep up the good work!

This is a great story, but I do have one question although it's probably mute since she was only available in the PS3 version... But will Patty be joining the group?

I get if she doesn't since she only really showed up in the PS3 version, but you could find a clue to when she was supposed to show up in the 360 version.

Anyway, good chapter and just curious about that one thing.

Poor Aster...though, things won't be any easier once they reach Capua Nor - we both know what we're talking about. Update whenever you can, please! OwO

nice work on the chapter its really good. I love your writing style its really easy to follow and the characters all act like they should. I look forward to the next chapter.

please keep up the good work.

Nice work on the story so far I love the character interaction and I feel that you are doing Really good job with their personality's. I can't wait for the next update.

please keep up the good work.

I love this story! Keep it up! Also, will Aster be able to form pacts with the monsters ,like Emil/Ratatosk(forgot how to spell that)did in ToS2?

The wait was worth it. But even after they left Ehmead Hill, they'll face MORE problems at Capua Nor - ergo Leviathan's Claw, a run in with Flynn, the Rybghro and its horn, Ragou and Barbos and finally Zagi.

At this rate, Aster would barely have a break.

Update whenever you can, please.

AGH! Why does Rita have to keep being a jerk! I'm not saying you need to change her character, it's a good enough, but I seriously wish she would give him respect. I mean, Aster's just as smart, if not even smarter, then her!
Ok, rant over.

But anyway, this is really good so far, I just wish Aster wouldn't get beat up so much. Physically and mentally. I know that's kind of hard, considering he's on another planet, barely knowing anything about it, and he doesn't know how to fight, but it just seems so miserable for him. I don't want a happy-go-lucky story, he's going to have to go through some grief and sadness, but I wish things were a bit happier for him.
That's the only thing that's bothering me, other than that, this is great, and I hope you keep it up! :)

Spar! Spar! Spar!
Aster and Estelle should spar! :p

anyway, great chapter, frankly I imagined aster wearing the clothes Emil wore on the very 1st part of DoTNW...

anyway :D happy writing :p

I think it high time that Aster learned a few Martial artes, well thru remembering how Richter does them... he is a freaking kid genius..

My respect for Rita is going down low... sheesh is she that brutal? well yeah, she does not have the slightest hesitation when trying to blast either Karol or Raven with Fireballs