| Reviews for To Be Alone |
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   TashaRose chapter 4 . 3/15/2014 Excellent and great what if scenario. |
| TashaRose chapter 1 . 3/15/2014 Excellent start to this one. Very plausible and believable. |
| onetreefan chapter 4 . 8/10/2013 Great story! |
| M7007 chapter 4 . 8/9/2013 "If he has to choose to save me or himself in the jungle, I want him to save himself. Living with that guilt alone would kill me." Love that line. ""You are the first thing that can be truly mine. Milah, though she loved me, was a married woman who loved adventure much more than stability. My love would have never been enough for her and I would have held her back." "Emma, look at me." Emma tried to look away from his piercing gaze but he put his right hand up to her cheek and turned her head back towards him. "I love you more than I have ever loved any woman. It seems I have waited for you longer than I have ever waited for any woman. When I thought you to be dead, I wished I were too. Without you, I might as well be." - Absolutely wonderful. You captured their personalities, fears, and hopes in this amazing short story. Congrats you're one heck of a Captain Swan writer! :) |
| M7007 chapter 3 . 8/9/2013 Happy ending... Happy ending... Can't wait for the next chapter... |
| M7007 chapter 2 . 8/9/2013 The dream was awesome and very creepy, I could totally see the dream sequence with peppy and frightening Henry... Also, I love your writing but I hate Killian's suicidal tendencies I both want to slap him upside the head and hug him... |
| M7007 chapter 1 . 8/9/2013 Oh, so sad. I love the detail and your writing, "He should have died, not her. One angry tear fell from his face as the Lost Boys tied his hands behind him and then slammed a rock over his head, silencing the thoughts that tormented him." Very heartfelt, I loved it! I hope for a happy ending. :) |
| Lisa1972 chapter 4 . 8/9/2013 *snort* Emma Emma Emma...he'll never back down you know... |
| PeaceHeather chapter 4 . 8/9/2013 Yay! Thank you for finishing this story, I was so happy to see the notice in my email this morning. Emma totally would try and shut him out after everything, wouldn't she, oy. |
| Ni Castle chapter 4 . 8/9/2013 Amazing story |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/21/2013 please continue it i need to know what happens next |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2013 MOREEEEE! its AWESOME |
| Lisa1972 chapter 3 . 6/24/2013 oh that's gonna be an excellent chapter! |
| mrwyer chapter 3 . 6/24/2013 Such a great story! I love it! Poor Killian doesn't believe Emma's alive. I can't wait for the reunion. |
| Ni Castle chapter 3 . 6/24/2013 To predict the next chapter Emma having a heart attack |
