I like this story. It’s one of the few hard to find non-harem Naruto stories

Why is he calling him sensei it’s kinda cringe

The capitalization is annoying and so is the grammar.. you also don’t superstar with the POV changes or the time changes and that is confusing as hell

Man you really need to capitalize the start of sentences...

I would love to see more of this story

I enjoyed this story and hope for an update it has been so long and u said you were going to finish it

With the current circumstances the last thing I want you to do is catch a bug. Buuuut.. If you HAD to catch one, do you think it could be the writing one again? It's been 4 years dude. Do you at least have an almost finished chapter sitting around on your computer? I'll take anything at this point.
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Thanks for two different read throughs. I enjoyed them both, though admittedly my expectations got in the way somewhat the first time. Still got there in the end though :)

Absolutely incredible story so far! I really hope that you continue it at some point!

Here’s hoping you eventually return to this beautiful piece.

I love this story can you please continue it please.

me gusta continualo

Shame Galatea died, always thought she got a horrible deal lol

Superman can tell Naruto is lying about his past? That's funny, there is no dialouge were Naruto speaks about his past here... Things don't add up? They literally spoke about Ramen and him being there, literally nothing else. What sort of massive plot hole is that.

There was no fucking slip up! He all of a sudden decided to become a hero and take out Toyman, Clark used X-Ray to see through his mask. The league responding the way they did is stupid, the dialouge is stupid and honestly starting from when Naruto went to Metropolis everything has been beyond stupid. Dunno what the fuck that other reviewer is saying, 9/10 times the MC spills his guts just because. Is insanity.

Kurama painting, while hilarious is stupid. Even more so that he passes that specific trait on to his Jinchuriki. I agree that it's stupid for sealing to be a bloodline trait but it's entirely possible it's just that the Uzumaki are very good at it through decades of family practice and teachings. Claiming that they were only good at it because Kurama is good at Painting or Calligraphy is beyond stupid. Even more stupid than sealing being a bloodline trait.

I really liked how Naruto just tomd Bats everything instead of refusing to talk about his past like in a bunch of other stories. Its easier and cleaner to be upfront.