You know, Malfoy should have been removed from the body of law since he refused to back up his claims. As for Umbridge, they should have brought up the legal fact that she has attacked Harry herself. How is Umbridge able to call anything, she is not on the Wizengamot body...she not even an under secretary anymore?

You know...a little of of a shadow spear to the back of the neck would have taken out Heihane.

Harry's wand was broken, when did he get a replacment?

you really are mixing things around, and changing things...why make side-along apparition illegal?

Harry broke up with ron

remember how it mentioned sekirei are immortal. what happens to the children they have, and when the ashikabi dies, as well as aging

I read almost all of this before I saw this version was abandoned in favor if a potential rewrite. My biggest suggestion, don't mix the two sources like this. Yume can arrive by some reason then become Harry's ally, with her original backstory. That alone would be enough. The rest just gets hard to manage.

It's a little hard to tell since you co-opted Sekirei, but, well Malfoy was guilty of attempted murder, and perhaps Akitsu as well, if she had the ability to choose. I assume its a game thing, but that is still a little jarring, compared to the potions response.

I want to know how are the Sekirei inside magical society because it complicates matters for Harry.

This version is good, but I know the rewrite will be even better!

Things are going to become complicated.

Moldyshorts is pissed off!

Dumbledore is borderline panicking.

Vernon is a total jerk!

Yume will be fine.