| Reviews for A new Pack |
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   Accalaion chapter 3 . 6/7/2015 Sorry but...Aiden would NEVER do this. While he may be indeed the more violent out of the twins, he would never actually trying to kill his brother. And although he may have threatened to 'rip off Dannys face and eat it' (or something like that) it was merely that. A threath. He would never actually do it. Not to a person he knows his brother is caring for so deeply. Maybe without this I would have liked your story but Aidens behavior in this is just too much for me to keep on reading. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/3/2013 You can't even spell beta correctly. I caught an obvious mistake in the first sentence (they're not their). Stop being so lazy, find a beta, and fix your problems. |
| EDANACAT chapter 8 . 9/3/2013 nonononononoNoNoNoNONONONONONO! Don't you dare kill Stiles :O Or Ethan for that matter...he's not saved yet :P Update soon :) |
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/26/2013 You're not running a spell check and you need to. You have too many obvious mistakes, get a beta or do a better job of proofing this. |
| Running-Wild22 chapter 4 . 8/27/2013 He's a little too confident. |
| yaoigirl89 chapter 7 . 8/26/2013 "I know, I kiss her too but she wouldn't want us doing this." Did you mean I "miss" her too? :) or is it like that? |
| Running-Wild22 chapter 2 . 8/26/2013 Wow Aiden is really evil! Yikes |
| Running-Wild22 chapter 1 . 8/26/2013 What is Aiden doing? |
| jeanette chapter 6 . 7/16/2013 I hope you update this story soon, because i love it |
| xoxoxoxo chapter 6 . 7/7/2013 cant wait to see what happens next |
| xoxoxoxo chapter 5 . 7/7/2013 great update... |
| teamsterekshipper chapter 6 . 7/7/2013 update a.s.a.p :-) |
| megangirl97 chapter 6 . 7/7/2013 just when i thought everything was perfect.. |
| megangirl97 chapter 5 . 7/7/2013 loved |
| yaoigirl89 chapter 5 . 6/28/2013 How come it sounded repeated between the sheriff and stiles? |
