| Reviews for In Utter Darkness |
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Guest chapter 27 . 5/11/2018 You should make naruto the ten tail beast jinjuriki because with its power he can overkill his ennemy and treat his destroyed world. I ask a question why has he not do it before ? |
Warlord Fellhammer chapter 27 . 11/18/2017 I first found this story many moons ago, long before I had an actual account and it was only five or six chapters long. I then proceeded to lose it and now that i have found it once more, I am truly glad to see how far it has progressed. |
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miguelgiuliano.co chapter 27 . 11/27/2016 Genial historia espero que un futuro lo continues . Espero que los humanos del planeta naruto y los protoss estén una alianza permanente . Y naruto y hinata tengan sus hijos junto a sus demás compañeros. |
singpu chapter 6 . 9/25/2016 wtf naruto verso gets so nerfed wtf is wrong with you? |
WisteriaKitsune chapter 12 . 8/9/2016 NIIIIAAAADDDRRRRAAAAA! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE! |
djmegamouth chapter 27 . 6/29/2016 This was an amazing story |
cha0sp0w3r chapter 5 . 2/14/2016 Ok I was kind of interested in the story but this chapter just made me quit in like 5 seconds. Naruto and Sasuke alone would have been able to take out the protoss cannon wise. Your version of shinobi is pretty much a normal human that can do a few tricks (which they don't even use). I get some of them struggling simply because the zealots might be a bad match up but kek. Ten Ten could have easily showered the Zealot with explosive tags, Chouji should have used his expansion jutsu and swatted them like flies, naruto and sakura should be able to take them out with a single punch, sasuke is faster than them and has the sharingan. Heck even normal shinobi could easily just spam jutsu like Grand Fireball and problem solved. |
reader chapter 1 . 2/18/2015 Forgive me for my outburst earlier but honestly, it was im sorry. |
reader chapter 1 . 2/13/2015 MY HONEST OPINION?THIS IS A VERY STUPID NERFED THE NINJA SO BAD IT POTRAY THEM AS THEY ARE IN CANNON AND YOU MIGHT HAVE A FAIR AND BIOLOGY VS CHAKRA AND WILLS AND SPIRIT OF IRON AND FIRE. |
reader chapter 3 . 2/13/2015 You have greatly nerfed naruto and konoha? On the first battle you make it sond like theyre average soldiers playing with ninja, theyre like super hard to hit, and most of the hits are not even direct cuz as soon as theyre hit theyre also fast.I mean naruto isnt using kage bushin nowhere near numerously as he should have is war and naruto usually uses a lot of kage bushin in his battles, here hes barely using is a powerhouse, he should have no trouble taking on a few of the could just swarm the base with kage bushin as destraction and swoop in and get hinata , no need for a big are fast and mobile , this is scarcely the interrogation why didnt switch to fic is really frustating. |
reader chapter 5 . 2/13/2015 Wind chakra infused kind chakra infused underpowerring shinobi quite a have the advantage of mobility even if they are in army sized could jump and land in army sized groups I think. |
Liedral chapter 6 . 2/9/2015 I have to ask... since this story was published in 2013... was the 10 tails even out in Naruto by then? But back to the review... the idea behind the story is nice, but the power levels of the shinobi are kinda ... weak to be honest. Spikes from Hydras? Shinobi are very used to projectile weapons, they can deflect shurikens and kunais in the dozens. The burrow from zerg units? Shinobis can travel underground so naturally there must be detection methods available to them. And as to VS the Protoss, let's be serious shall we? In a SCII game, marines with stim packs can catch up to zealots and the like, without the stim packs... pretty much similar run speed right? So we'll say... Zealots/Protoss have the same speed and reaction time as trained army soldier does. A shinobi... who are capable of much greater speed, and let's not even think about the 8 gates Gai and Lee are able to open... would steamroll the Protoss... and easily at that. And add to the The Last: Naruto the movie... where Naruto gains enough power to stop a strike that can slice the moon in half... the very idea of him being only able to fight on par with the Protoss... it's very ridiculous. Even if you say Shield armor or whatever tech the Protoss can come up with, if the Zerg and Terran can break through those... so can Naruto, and with greater ease then either of those races can. |
Finwee Lord of Long Winds chapter 27 . 1/17/2015 I really like this story. |
Kinunatzs The Eternal chapter 27 . 1/11/2015 I don't know if I already said this but the Naruto-verse Shinobi's are astronomically nerfed especially their speed where they should able to move Supersonic Speed at Minimum and Hypersonic Speed on Top-Tier |