This is a wonderful story! I'm so glad to have found it. A little disappointed to see how long it's been since you updated though. I really hope that you have plans to continue because this story is too good to fade away! Truly, I adore the entire concept and am dying to know what happens. Please update, I beg you!

You wrote Galadriel beautifully! Hoping the muse strikes and time allows for another update soon!

My heart breaks for her. Really like Vallen as a character.

Felt giddy when Elrond spoke her name and tittle. Take that Thorin! I feel for our heroine her past has been so gruesome!

Thank you for an enjoyable chapter.

Very much love the story, I think having a human dragon is fascinating but I l love where you're going with the story. I cannot wait to see Vallen's relationship with Thorin grow and what happens when the company finds out what she is. Did she have her wings removed? Is that why her back is covered in scars and she's in human form? That would be heartbreaking! Anyway, can't wait for the next update!

most interesting new chapter to read way happy you updated again. :)

I absolutely adored the banter in this chapter. it was so funny. These two are quite the pair. I can't wait to read more!

I absolutely love it! One of the best hobbit hobbit fanfics out there
Hope you update soon!

I've just finished chapter 10, the latest one, and oh my Dickens! This is amazing! I have yet to see a spin on the Hobbit quite like this one, and I l-

*hears wailing in the distance*

Ahem. As I was saying, I lo-

*wailing noise turns into howling*

You guys got any idea what that noise is? I'm trying to finish telling you how amazing your stor-

"PLEASE! PLEASE DON'T FORGOT ABOUT ME!"

Oh. Uh, I think that sounds like Nadia. Yup, there's soke on the horizon, definitely her. She sounds pretty devestated. I finish quickly; I-love-this-story-please-for-the-love-of-Mahal-don't-forget-about-it

P's love the sarcasm throughout all of this. You guys nailed it

So glad that i have found this story. Your OC is brilliant , i really like her Personality and she fits Perfectly in, in the world of Tolkien. Very well Done. I also like your authentic depiction of Thorin, he is not some fluffy and wussy king. I sincerely hope that you will continue with this so Far promising story.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you'll update soon :)

Fantastic so far!

I typically don't read T rated stories but one of my favorite authors had this story listed as one of their favorites.

I typically do not read the Author Notes at the beginning or end of a chapter, but yours were mildly funny and I started to read them.

I wish I hadn't. Unless I am mistaken, I did not read anywhere in the plot saying Vallen was a dragon, but with your notes she claims she is one? It was spoiled. :c

liked it interesting to read :) be happy to read more