3.
First walk/
Changing
it happened to me I'Reneesme Cullen was Seeing each twin pairs of Legs suddenly Crunched onto my twin pairs of my own Neck very far too hardest but a Crashed but Father Moon made me Venomous offically then suddenly crunched it then suddenly formed a strangest wax with the bodysuit Reneesme she is not breathing at all could have kids differently myself Farrowed the Crimson eyes officially oh ugh then my heart beat alien and Extraterreestrial myself tried to speak then Screamed a siren's scream of death what happened my throat is murder ugh bingo ANIMALS! Mom Dad ugh I was airless but without the gas at all I need to hunt good god I am into heat calm her down I remained somber Reneesme you have no air some twins what you say to her Reneesme Carlie Cullen you are now officially a Vampire lets see your senses have improved muscles had changed but online you do not need to rest you are a Lamia it is breeding female Vampire prepare yourself go into heat you do not need the air you are Venomous we and Father Moon it was true I was changed but the morning arose I was not breathing or had no tears at all hunted like Craziest and all of the sudden was still going like Bananas BANZAI! Killing as avery tribazillions as all of the as all of them suddenly the very as all of the Animals very as all of the blood all of the sudden was still on the prowl my speed was more different but it happened feeding as all then had to Burp very really loud Excuse me I frumped my thing I have manners I'm a Vegetarian I am on a strict but Specialized Colonial space marine diet no thank you am undead ugh Nessie it was no more lost my color of my skin was more pale then it happened my eye color were Fully Golden officially I was so hungry it happened took away each both seeds for keeping it went very too wrong with the other turned and the hybrids were trained became Venomous with the three suddenly it each both with as all of it Exploded very too much many much many more as all of it suddenly Shattered very too far way much many more loudest like a Atomic bomb roaring it's Done then took as very as all of them Suddenly causing a lot off changes but took from America to Italy but their own Prizes had Human blood all of them were Carnivorous replaced us and them married but had fruiends who intermating then all of the sudden completely enslaved humanity were terrified were killed next no more humanity our as all of the Animals cloned met us/them with each three Races reawakened with myself cycled differently with my coven then I felt no pulse or heartbeat but was destroyed with ourselves but looked about Seventeen frozen in time unable to have kids they look my age frozen in time but with as very as all of them suddenly gotten resurrected but risen differently found ourselves undead but was all of it gone but new places replaced the old places but as very as all of it suddenly it went BLAST! But ravaging the very wholliest of the planet Earth but it went too far and suddenly destroyed the Prizes and Didyme forever but much many more as all his prizes with the very as all both suddenly went too loudest but destroyed as well more each five shattered but their children half of it but ourselves were Kindred they were as all of the Interplanetary Lycans with Interplanetary Shifters were so Enraged but the First Northwestern Vampire wars Erupted but it was officially open to fight it was too late we were as well I was a Hissing but a real growl roared dressed from Solarbabies myself was armed with a Gun was athletically Fit I was the first Vampire slayer in history to hunt them down to Extinction was lethal but dangerous I was strong by now she what killed it it is a Scout there is a history you are a Vampire Slayer you can't die of your both merged it is Vampire blood but never rest but you are Venomous for real the Volturi heard this we were invisible but we were restless but could rest better they were so furious but enraged onto us/them were ancient by now never dying or living but it nore people we were on Vulcan their planet but crawled outside with each both but shattered it all of it but trapped in here we were lost in time-space their very as all of them we were wild but Nomadic beings but lost our bones to them bound in here forever much many more.

Your keeping the same story line and all the characters and what happens the same just rewriting it in a different way or are you completely starting over but keep the same plot becuss I liked the story the way it is maybe a little change would be good but the story is good done doubt yourself please private message me with you r answer thanks bye

Elizabeth, Edward's Mom's name :) Good Story Keep It Up!

It's sooo good! Please keep writing more! I vote for Claire!

Scarlett

Sophia
Ava
Emma

Avery

Chloe

Ava

Claire

You said if you have any other name ideas, so Bianca, Lolo,

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Harper

Ava, Julia, and Harper.

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Please write more... Bellyanna

Ava, Julia, and Harper.

Chloe is my no. 1, then Harper, then ava

Chloe