I loved it and i did not see that many mistakes in this but i would like it to see a part two or something but as i said love it. i was actually turned on of this you get 10 of 10 stars and damn i don't really use to get turned on about reading things like this but wow good work if i remember this fanfic when i meet my friend i will gladly tell them about this story

Actually they are more like cats then dogs

Awful.

Hope she finds him soon

Great story :) can you make this into a full blown story would be bad ass

Could you please make a sequel for suicune
This story is my absolute favorites
Great writing

Sequel involving Suicune, please!

You should definitely make another one for Suicune. This was pretty darn good, as everyone else says and I would enjoy seeing what happens next.

Amazing story. I hope you finish it though.

Well... That was... wow. This might be the first one of these stories I've read, I must say it was enjoyable. I find it interesting that you included specific details about heat and electricity- many authors wouldn't have thought of that. Over all, i'd give this a 8.5/10, though it could be higher if more detail was added. Personally, i enjoyed this very much.

Hoo, that was lovely! One of the best pokephilia fictions I've ever read! Make more!

This little peice of work was amazing and fun to read. If you have not already, you should make a sequel. Many would love it, most likely. Your writing was beautiful, and you could practically see the way Entei and Raikou would be if this were to happen. The way Lyra was sheepish at first was very well done, and I also like how you had a great backstory. This has to be one of the better PokèPorn 'fics I've read, and I wish you happy writing.

This was an excellent read.

Good to see that I'm not the only one who like pokemon X humans! Good read!